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Array ( [sid] => 89434 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => What am I? [time] => 2005-03-31 02:51:05 [hometext] => I've been writing quite a while now but just now started posting. This is one of my first and one of my favorites. It was originally meant to be a song, but I can't put words to music. [bodytext] => I look at the sky,
the wonders of Your hand.
Every start You put in place,
every tree among the land.

Time has no the abilitie,
to for such wonders.
For it can't create,
bright lighting and loud thunder.

Nor the food we eat,
or the pets we own.
The people we see,
and the things unknown.

What are we that You should think of us?
Mere humans, why would You care for us.
You sent Your son to die on the cross.
So we wouldn't suffer the greatest loss.

Yet You take me in,
as one of Your own.
And treasure me,
as priceless gold.

Oh so powerful,
and oh so wonderful.
There's nothing I can do
that could be compared to You.

What are we that You should think of us?
Mere humans, why would You care for us.
You sent Your son to die on the cross.
So we wouldn't suffer the greatest loss
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What am I?

Contributed by scottmunster on Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 02:51:05 AM in AEST
Topic: ChristianPoetry

I look at the sky,
the wonders of Your hand.
Every start You put in place,
every tree among the land.

Time has no the abilitie,
to for such wonders.
For it can't create,
bright lighting and loud thunder.

Nor the food we eat,
or the pets we own.
The people we see,
and the things unknown.

What are we that You should think of us?
Mere humans, why would You care for us.
You sent Your son to die on the cross.
So we wouldn't suffer the greatest loss.

Yet You take me in,
as one of Your own.
And treasure me,
as priceless gold.

Oh so powerful,
and oh so wonderful.
There's nothing I can do
that could be compared to You.

What are we that You should think of us?
Mere humans, why would You care for us.
You sent Your son to die on the cross.
So we wouldn't suffer the greatest loss

Copyright © scottmunster ... [ 2005-03-31 02:51:05]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: What am I? (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 07:14:59 AM AEST
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Scottmunster

Nice poem I hope you keep writing and posting the world needs your thoughts.

Sinned

Re: What am I? (User Rating: 1 )
by SocialMisfit on Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 07:33:31 PM AEST
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nice job scott this i could practically hear you singing, i bet you could do it if you tryed, anyhow good write and keep em' comeing

SM

Re: What am I? (User Rating: 1 )
by Scott on Wednesday, 14th March 2007 @ 02:51:23 PM AEST
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cool, another scott!

anyhew, awesome write. I think the G-man would really like it. You don't need to put it to music-the best praises to God are those you make with just your own voice. Nice rhyme scheme, good imagery. keep it up!

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