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Yet there are people all around me
As I sit here in my desk and think about it all day long
It just won’t get out of my head
Please get out of my head!!
Finally I can’t take it anymore
I go into the bathroom
And pull the scissors from my pocket
Freshly sharpened so it’s perfect every time.
There are voices all around me
Yet there is no one there
These voices in my head,
They keep telling me just to do it.
I sit in the stall all by myself with it.
It never goes away
It seems it will live on in my life forever
Never ending, never fading
I just can’t take it anymore
I put the cool metal to my wrist
And slowly dig it in
The blood pores out along with all the worries
A sudden feeling of relief from all the pain.
*sigh*
Finally!

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all alone

Contributed by brokengirl on Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 12:48:08 AM in AEST
Topic: self-harmpoetry

It makes me feel like I'm all alone
Yet there are people all around me
As I sit here in my desk and think about it all day long
It just won’t get out of my head
Please get out of my head!!
Finally I can’t take it anymore
I go into the bathroom
And pull the scissors from my pocket
Freshly sharpened so it’s perfect every time.
There are voices all around me
Yet there is no one there
These voices in my head,
They keep telling me just to do it.
I sit in the stall all by myself with it.
It never goes away
It seems it will live on in my life forever
Never ending, never fading
I just can’t take it anymore
I put the cool metal to my wrist
And slowly dig it in
The blood pores out along with all the worries
A sudden feeling of relief from all the pain.
*sigh*
Finally!

Copyright Â© brokengirl ... [ 2005-03-31 00:48:08]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: all alone (User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 12:53:20 AM AEST
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::sigh::....I hope you don't actually cut...I am a past cutter.........But I hope you are okay. You can PM me anytime....

Clark

Re: all alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Baronhawk on Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 09:50:34 AM AEST
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A rather poignant picture you have here...a poetic expression that does tears at my heart as does the scissors does tears into the arms of your protagonist...the tone is intense and the tale is indeed one that can be felt as well as read ..a true emotional release echoed from a wounded soul perhaps...or just in the view of a mind's eye...but it is rather disturbing...in its conclusion..while I must say that this is a poem well-felt..it does disturbs my heart...cutting is rather dangerous and can lead to more dangerous situations.

Re: all alone (User Rating: 1 )
by blue_angel on Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 11:13:16 AM AEST
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wow, powerful words, very emotion filled, sadly true. being a cutter myself, i can relate to the feeling of addiction, being both physical and mental. great write, although very sad. u can PM me netime if you ever wanna talk.
luv n hugs
jennie*

Re: all alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Friday, 1st April 2005 @ 08:36:28 AM AEST
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Brokengirl
The whisper in your ear is satan.
You are made in Gods image.
"I hold you in the palm of MY hand"
"I AM with you all days"
Powerful write,but I hope you are not a cutter.
You are special in Gods eyes.
A friend

Sinned

Re: all alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Stonedraider23 on Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 12:44:40 AM AEST
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good write but why cut its retarded if ur gunna cut cut sumone else ummm yea im dumb great write

Re: all alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 03:14:03 AM AEST
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Well expressed. You've expressed yourself very well here, I think. I wish life was better for you.
Take care. Please.
David

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