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Array ( [sid] => 89294 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Craving Love [time] => 2005-03-30 03:20:42 [hometext] => I wrote this when i couldint sleep, its about feelings ive had inside after my first real crush [bodytext] => What’s wrong with me I just don’t understand it
I thought I would have it once, but I just couldn’t grab it
These feelings I want so deeply inside
But I just sit at home and I wonder why

I’ve suffered through death but ill leave that to rest
But this feeling I want is deep inside my chest
I’ve tried so hard to find a woman to love
But they keep getting away, like trying to catch a dove

I know it’s pathetic but I don’t care
I just want to hold her like a teddy bear
But every time I think I’ve found someone to love
They just fly away with fear of my love

The first time it happened I couldn’t explain it
So I tried to hide it, by locking and chaining it
Because of what I felt I looked out side
I just stared at her wanting to die

I waited to long and my crush flew away
And I think of her when I see them today
What’s wrong with me I wonder in my head?
What’s in me that’s so easy to dread?

It happened again but this time I didn’t deny
I talked to her and tried to catch her myself
But she became another one on the shelf
But she wasn’t lost I thought to myself
Maybe if I befriend her ill take her for myself

For awhile after my failed first date, I tried to impress her
Thinking of new ways I sat to ponder
Thinking the next day she would like me back
Why did I even think about that?

For she flew away into the sky
With an invisible capture that I never saw eye to eye
This time I felt worse than before
But not because I liked her any more

Because I cant have what I want to dread
A woman to love and hold near my head
Why can’t I have it I wonder at night?
Maybe it’s because I don’t put up much of a fight

Is there something I’m missing that they adore?
Why is finding what I desire such a chore?
Why do I feel like such a bore?
I don’t care about the scares that they have tore
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Craving Love

Contributed by skadmatrix on Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 03:20:42 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



What’s wrong with me I just don’t understand it
I thought I would have it once, but I just couldn’t grab it
These feelings I want so deeply inside
But I just sit at home and I wonder why

I’ve suffered through death but ill leave that to rest
But this feeling I want is deep inside my chest
I’ve tried so hard to find a woman to love
But they keep getting away, like trying to catch a dove

I know it’s pathetic but I don’t care
I just want to hold her like a teddy bear
But every time I think I’ve found someone to love
They just fly away with fear of my love

The first time it happened I couldn’t explain it
So I tried to hide it, by locking and chaining it
Because of what I felt I looked out side
I just stared at her wanting to die

I waited to long and my crush flew away
And I think of her when I see them today
What’s wrong with me I wonder in my head?
What’s in me that’s so easy to dread?

It happened again but this time I didn’t deny
I talked to her and tried to catch her myself
But she became another one on the shelf
But she wasn’t lost I thought to myself
Maybe if I befriend her ill take her for myself

For awhile after my failed first date, I tried to impress her
Thinking of new ways I sat to ponder
Thinking the next day she would like me back
Why did I even think about that?

For she flew away into the sky
With an invisible capture that I never saw eye to eye
This time I felt worse than before
But not because I liked her any more

Because I cant have what I want to dread
A woman to love and hold near my head
Why can’t I have it I wonder at night?
Maybe it’s because I don’t put up much of a fight

Is there something I’m missing that they adore?
Why is finding what I desire such a chore?
Why do I feel like such a bore?
I don’t care about the scares that they have tore




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Re: Craving Love (User Rating: 1 )
by xtremcalibur on Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 08:51:02 AM AEST
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Have you ever thought that it might not be you at all? Things happen for a reason and it is better to lose something that was never meant to be, then to have it and wish you never did. I really liked your poetry. I felt the questions and the pain. Great write




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