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Array ( [sid] => 89261 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Dream [time] => 2005-03-29 22:04:51 [hometext] => I wrote this one a long time ago.... i had written a guitar accompaniment for it, unfortunately i had forgotten it and destroyed all reference to it (after the girl i wrote it about left me), but the poem survived b/c i had uploaded it to the web! [bodytext] => I had a dream last night of you and me
your face so pretty and clear to see
and it was your beauty, I do decree
that struck my love for u, my emily

It was a dream I will not soon forget
it is embedded into my mind, there it has been set
but, although, to much regret
my memory of it is but a silhouette

we were walking over the beaches hand in hand
you gracefully striding over the sand
your beauty was enough to knock me out
your smile enough to make me sing and shout

as we approached the city square
I put my hand to your beautiful hair
and then you did as I thought u would never dare
you gave me a kiss on the lips, and my heart rose into the air

I do declare, there were other people there
but of those people I did not care
because the only thing I cared to see
was the image of your face staring back at me

but then u left
leaving me in great bereft
but you, with your beauty and your fair
handed me a token to show how much u care

but it was only a delightful fantasy
you are not here as I wish u could be
I must wait for the happiness and glee
of your returning back to me

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 170 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Mazi [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Dream

Contributed by Mazi on Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 10:04:51 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



I had a dream last night of you and me
your face so pretty and clear to see
and it was your beauty, I do decree
that struck my love for u, my emily

It was a dream I will not soon forget
it is embedded into my mind, there it has been set
but, although, to much regret
my memory of it is but a silhouette

we were walking over the beaches hand in hand
you gracefully striding over the sand
your beauty was enough to knock me out
your smile enough to make me sing and shout

as we approached the city square
I put my hand to your beautiful hair
and then you did as I thought u would never dare
you gave me a kiss on the lips, and my heart rose into the air

I do declare, there were other people there
but of those people I did not care
because the only thing I cared to see
was the image of your face staring back at me

but then u left
leaving me in great bereft
but you, with your beauty and your fair
handed me a token to show how much u care

but it was only a delightful fantasy
you are not here as I wish u could be
I must wait for the happiness and glee
of your returning back to me





Copyright © Mazi ... [ 2005-03-29 22:04:51]
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Re: Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by SensitiveSoAbused on Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 10:56:13 PM AEST
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Very cute.


Re: Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 11:11:05 PM AEST
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This is such a sweet but sad poem. It's so well written with an excellent flow. I really enjoyed reading. Great work!




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