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Array ( [sid] => 89217 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Vanity [time] => 2005-03-29 16:51:42 [hometext] => People are so wrapped up in their apperance, they barely notice my pain, that ive made along my arm... [bodytext] => Your vanity is what scares me,
Demons screaming inside my head to curse you.
To make you ugly, to make you fat,
And force you to be yourself.
Maybe your personality is so vile,
That you have to talk about yourself.
To have any word of interest to say at all,
They're getting boring now.
I made a 2 inch line of raw red flesh,
Across my arm, blood oozed out;
In a slow trickling fashion.
You stopped and started,
Wondering how the hell I could do that;
To kill my outside appearance.
Because that would be a nightmare for you,
But the difference is:
Im real.
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 164 [topic] => 72 [informant] => Pats4eva7 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 12 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => self-harmpoetry )

Vanity

Contributed by Pats4eva7 on Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 04:51:42 PM in AEST
Topic: self-harmpoetry

Your vanity is what scares me,
Demons screaming inside my head to curse you.
To make you ugly, to make you fat,
And force you to be yourself.
Maybe your personality is so vile,
That you have to talk about yourself.
To have any word of interest to say at all,
They're getting boring now.
I made a 2 inch line of raw red flesh,
Across my arm, blood oozed out;
In a slow trickling fashion.
You stopped and started,
Wondering how the hell I could do that;
To kill my outside appearance.
Because that would be a nightmare for you,
But the difference is:
Im real.

Copyright © Pats4eva7 ... [ 2005-03-29 16:51:42]
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Re: Vanity (User Rating: 1 )
by DesolantDreamer on Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 04:58:07 PM AEST
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Very deep and greatly written. I am a cutter and know alot about this. Indeed man is a frail creature, so easily impressed and influenced. Stay strong...someone has to.

Re: Vanity (User Rating: 1 )
by guiltycircles on Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 03:23:21 AM AEST
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hey i know the feeling... i cut and whenever my mum finds out she's so worried about it scarring, thinking that i care what it looks like... awesome poem for a subject that creates so much anger

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