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Array ( [sid] => 88929 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Please Don't Turn Around [time] => 2005-03-27 09:16:02 [hometext] => *This is a sequel to my first poem I Just Want you to Know* [bodytext] => Please don't turn around.
And this is going to sound selfish,
but you and I both know,
that I'm the best you've had.
You've said it yourself,
after two months of dating, you said,
"Steve, your different, your not just some jerk."
And that's why I won't let you go.
Because I'm the best you've had,
and you're the best I've had.
You make me smile
laugh
and most of all,
you make me feel the warmth of your love.

I can see it in your eyes.
You don't laugh as much with him.
And every time I pass, you look in my direction.

Just because your feelings for me fade,
doesn't mean that they can't be relit.
And I'm going to try to re-light your feelings,
because I haven't mentioned one thing in this poem,
and that is....

....That I still love you. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 150 [topic] => 2 [informant] => thepizzaguy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 2 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Please Don't Turn Around

Contributed by thepizzaguy on Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 09:16:02 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Please don't turn around.
And this is going to sound selfish,
but you and I both know,
that I'm the best you've had.
You've said it yourself,
after two months of dating, you said,
"Steve, your different, your not just some jerk."
And that's why I won't let you go.
Because I'm the best you've had,
and you're the best I've had.
You make me smile
laugh
and most of all,
you make me feel the warmth of your love.

I can see it in your eyes.
You don't laugh as much with him.
And every time I pass, you look in my direction.

Just because your feelings for me fade,
doesn't mean that they can't be relit.
And I'm going to try to re-light your feelings,
because I haven't mentioned one thing in this poem,
and that is....

....That I still love you.

Copyright © thepizzaguy ... [ 2005-03-27 09:16:02]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Please Don't Turn Around (User Rating: 1 )
by Evshrug on Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 04:12:08 AM AEST
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This poem is interesting for how it looks at someone who holds on, blind to his defeat. However, knowing that this is based on life, DON'T! Although, I can't tell you how... except you made her up to be better than she really was to you. It's noble that you give love your all and every chance, but not at the cost for a fantasy.

Still, I was VERY shocked that he did this, but really he was doing you a long term favor. Just a short term stab. I hope he didn't twist the knife, and hope against hope she didn't either.

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