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[title] => You
[time] => 2002-12-19 10:00:00
[hometext] => This poem is aout somebody.......hehe.....have fun.
[bodytext] => You.
Even though I've never met you before.
I feel like I have.
Someday I will.
Hope.
I can't wait to hear your laugh.
To see your smile up close.
To see the way you move.
The way you dance.
The way you talk.
I'd like to hear your view on things.
I can't describe my feelings.
But I know that they are strong.
I hope to hear how you feel aabout me too.
Everything about you lightens up my mood.
I'm never sad or mad.
Always happy.
When I'm with you.
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You
Contributed by
elfinfarie
on
Thursday, 19th December 2002 @ 10:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You.
Even though I've never met you before.
I feel like I have.
Someday I will.
Hope.
I can't wait to hear your laugh.
To see your smile up close.
To see the way you move.
The way you dance.
The way you talk.
I'd like to hear your view on things.
I can't describe my feelings.
But I know that they are strong.
I hope to hear how you feel aabout me too.
Everything about you lightens up my mood.
I'm never sad or mad.
Always happy.
When I'm with you.
Copyright ©
elfinfarie
... [
2002-12-19 10:00:00]
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Re: You
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by frozensuicide on
Thursday, 19th December 2002 @ 10:22:31 AM AEST
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| this is goooda! heeh! i like it! i bet he likse it too. right? right? ehhe! put up your firery soul one! i like that one, thats a good one! but this is a good one too! but short! heh-heh but good! good write! write another! |
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Re: You
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by PrincessSteffy on
Thursday, 19th December 2002 @ 10:26:58 AM AEST
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| Aw..Nice write. |
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Re: You
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by GEQUETSCHT on
Thursday, 19th December 2002 @ 03:25:23 PM AEST
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awwww i know exactly how this is, exactly at this moment. I just wish the guy that im all about would realise it. and no matter how hard i try, it catches me every morning when i wake up, and i cant stop it.
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Re: You
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by fallensilence on
Thursday, 19th December 2002 @ 03:43:25 PM AEST
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| i loved this, its just one of those that touches you and makes you feel all nice inside after you've read it. keep up the good work. |
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Re: You
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by OreO on
Thursday, 19th December 2002 @ 08:51:02 PM AEST
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This is beautiful the way you wrote this one...i hope you get to meet this person one day it sounds like you really care for this person alot...thanks for sharing it...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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Re: You
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by elfinfarie on
Thursday, 19th December 2002 @ 11:17:23 PM AEST
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| yeah...i love those kind ofmoments. maybe you should try telling him? it took me awhile to sned this poem to the guy (who this poem is about). and he replied back. so maybe you should try and see if he feels the same way? |
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Re: You
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by elfinfarie on
Thursday, 19th December 2002 @ 11:19:48 PM AEST
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| yeah those poems are the best. they make you feel all warm and special inside. thank you. ill check some stuff by you and reply to yourstuff also. |
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Re: You
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by elfinfarie on
Thursday, 19th December 2002 @ 11:22:32 PM AEST
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| Thank You. i hope i do too. yes, i care for him alot. hes special. nobody else like him. your welcome. i like your name..oreo.....! cool. |
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Re: You
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by bopeep on
Friday, 20th December 2002 @ 12:12:43 AM AEST
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| sweet. the Hope on it doesn't make sense though. but uh you should really reconsider this poem with all thats going on around you. but other than that, its sweet. and you shouldn't play mind games on him! |
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Re: You
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 21st December 2002 @ 05:21:07 PM AEST
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Great write..
Jenni |
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Re: You
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 21st December 2002 @ 05:21:08 PM AEST
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Great write..
Jenni |
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