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Array ( [sid] => 88718 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Your Wall [time] => 2005-03-25 16:08:26 [hometext] => Wanting want you can't have can make you go insane........... give me your thoughts [bodytext] => I paint pictures
In my mind
I drift to the place
Where we could be
I feel you there
I see your smile
I hear your laughter
I sense your comfort
The could be
It's always so perfect
So amazing
So beautiful
Just when I think
I'm about to feel your touch
Your wall is there
A sobering reminder
In so many ways
I've tried so hard
To break it down
But you stand still
On the otherside
So close but so far away
And so I stand
On my side of your wall
I try so hard
To stand strong
To look you in your eye
And pretend
I'm not trembling inside
Pretend my heart
Is not calling out to you
I pretend at my will
I'll just walk away
But my steps are frozen
As if they've told my heart
There's a reason
To stay where you are
And so I stay
Beyond my control
I stand
Staring into your soul
I wonder
If this is all it will ever be
Will I stand forever
With you
Just beyond my reach
Will you ever
Break down your wall

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Your Wall

Contributed by imaginestars on Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 04:08:26 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I paint pictures
In my mind
I drift to the place
Where we could be
I feel you there
I see your smile
I hear your laughter
I sense your comfort
The could be
It's always so perfect
So amazing
So beautiful
Just when I think
I'm about to feel your touch
Your wall is there
A sobering reminder
In so many ways
I've tried so hard
To break it down
But you stand still
On the otherside
So close but so far away
And so I stand
On my side of your wall
I try so hard
To stand strong
To look you in your eye
And pretend
I'm not trembling inside
Pretend my heart
Is not calling out to you
I pretend at my will
I'll just walk away
But my steps are frozen
As if they've told my heart
There's a reason
To stay where you are
And so I stay
Beyond my control
I stand
Staring into your soul
I wonder
If this is all it will ever be
Will I stand forever
With you
Just beyond my reach
Will you ever
Break down your wall

Copyright © imaginestars ... [ 2005-03-25 16:08:26]
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Re: Your Wall (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 04:24:22 PM AEST
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Very good write. Reminds me of an ole friend of mine but the walls are tumbling down never to return again.
Luv this write as I can so relate.
Luv your pen name too.
huggs,
emy

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