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Array ( [sid] => 88698 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Dance with me... [time] => 2005-03-25 12:06:21 [hometext] => They say dancing is like making love... only on a dance floor... [bodytext] => Low moans from the drums,
Soft tinkling of that precious piano,
Trumpets have yet to cry out their shrill song,
Flemenco guitar sighs a sweet hymn of bliss,
And the songstress cues all with her powerful voice…


The rhythm quickens,
A torrent of pure Cuban music,
And my heart cannot help but swell with love and pride…


I feel my body succumbing to this enticing sound,
Hips rolling with the beat,
Head back, eyes closed,
Enraptured in this world of song and dance…
I sacrifice myself wholly to the touch of music,
It’s subliminal tale of passion,
Drowning in an ocean of pleasure…

Hands on my hips, yet they are not mine…
A stranger, that same lurking shadow,
I feel safe in his grasp,
Letting go every apprehension, of every worry,
Setting myself free…


Lost in each other’s eyes,
Making love on the dance floor,
A frenzied tango of desire,
Lust vivid in our rough twists and turns…

The room is pulsating with Merengue and yearning,
Bodies all a blur,
The heat is rising when we thought it couldn’t get any hotter…
Unbearable, bittersweet,
Oh, such pleasurable agony!

Touch me again, darling shadow,
Have your way with me,
And I’ll have mine…


The night is young,
The party has just begun,
And we’ll dance till the morning sun…


Dance with me, perfect stranger,
Our own tango of passionate love,
The music will never stop,
La Ardeur will keep on rising,
The flames will never die…
Dance with me, dark mystery,

And I’ll complete your every fantasy…

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Dance with me...

Contributed by FleurdeSang on Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 12:06:21 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Low moans from the drums,
Soft tinkling of that precious piano,
Trumpets have yet to cry out their shrill song,
Flemenco guitar sighs a sweet hymn of bliss,
And the songstress cues all with her powerful voice…


The rhythm quickens,
A torrent of pure Cuban music,
And my heart cannot help but swell with love and pride…


I feel my body succumbing to this enticing sound,
Hips rolling with the beat,
Head back, eyes closed,
Enraptured in this world of song and dance…
I sacrifice myself wholly to the touch of music,
It’s subliminal tale of passion,
Drowning in an ocean of pleasure…

Hands on my hips, yet they are not mine…
A stranger, that same lurking shadow,
I feel safe in his grasp,
Letting go every apprehension, of every worry,
Setting myself free…


Lost in each other’s eyes,
Making love on the dance floor,
A frenzied tango of desire,
Lust vivid in our rough twists and turns…

The room is pulsating with Merengue and yearning,
Bodies all a blur,
The heat is rising when we thought it couldn’t get any hotter…
Unbearable, bittersweet,
Oh, such pleasurable agony!

Touch me again, darling shadow,
Have your way with me,
And I’ll have mine…


The night is young,
The party has just begun,
And we’ll dance till the morning sun…


Dance with me, perfect stranger,
Our own tango of passionate love,
The music will never stop,
La Ardeur will keep on rising,
The flames will never die…
Dance with me, dark mystery,

And I’ll complete your every fantasy…





Copyright © FleurdeSang ... [ 2005-03-25 12:06:21]
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Re: Dance with me... (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 12:08:11 PM AEST
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mmm lovely jubbly, this sent shivers up my spine and made me think of my bloke lol :) another great poem
pix xx


Re: Dance with me... (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 01:06:22 PM AEST
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Woah...
*catches breath* I didn't even realize I was holding my breath... lol.

This is realy good Stephy, I love the metaphore (Why does that look spelt wrong? lol) you used..

Fantastic write sweetie,
*hugs tons* Phil xxx


Re: Dance with me... (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 01:49:47 PM AEST
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Wow...This really had me going... It is the perfect dance....great poem!!!

Hugs
Jenni


Re: Dance with me... (User Rating: 1 )
by SimplyMe on Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 02:14:42 PM AEST
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This poem had me on the edge of my seat from beginning to end. You sure have a way with words Stephy. You cease to entertain your readers. Wonderful job. Great Metaphor. I absolutely loved this poem.

~Alucia~


Re: Dance with me... (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 02:58:57 PM AEST
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What a beautiful write Stephy, this reminded me of dirty dancing (great movie).

I loved every thing about this, well done.

Jane


Re: Dance with me... (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 07:25:05 PM AEST
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Beautiful work of musical art . . .


Dorian Chambers




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