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Array ( [sid] => 87937 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Unless it's good-bye [time] => 2005-03-18 21:49:16 [hometext] => [bodytext] => You don't realize the words you use
They are sharper than a razors edge
And they cut deep
Yet you only use them to release your anger
This hatred you have...
I always seem to be the target
Or the reason why...
But you spew your angry words
And I no longer hear you
I don’t choose to listen anymore.
I grow weary of your actions
I grow so tired of your words
Always the same...
Never any change...
I hate the words you mutter
Don’t speak to me again,
Unless its good-bye...
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Unless it's good-bye

Contributed by holderofthestone on Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 09:49:16 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

You don't realize the words you use
They are sharper than a razors edge
And they cut deep
Yet you only use them to release your anger
This hatred you have...
I always seem to be the target
Or the reason why...
But you spew your angry words
And I no longer hear you
I don’t choose to listen anymore.
I grow weary of your actions
I grow so tired of your words
Always the same...
Never any change...
I hate the words you mutter
Don’t speak to me again,
Unless its good-bye...

Copyright Â© holderofthestone ... [ 2005-03-18 21:49:16]
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Re: Unless it's good-bye (User Rating: 1 )
by TheVoice on Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 10:00:58 PM AEST
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such a powerful write. duct tape goes a long way. keep smiling.

the voice

Re: Unless it's good-bye (User Rating: 1 )
by reprobate on Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 11:21:45 PM AEST
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i have had the same thoughts at times. you know, with a little polish, this has all the earmarks of a masterpiece!
good job
thanks for sharing

Re: Unless it's good-bye (User Rating: 1 )
by Living_In_My_Dream on Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 01:57:48 AM AEST
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This is a sad write, I never say good-bye unless its fors sure Ill never see the person again. Good-bye to me is final. I dont know good write tho. I liked it.

Re: Unless it's good-bye (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 05:57:16 PM AEST
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Your words remind me of a song

"You're way on top now
and you're having a ball
you've got your world on a string
you think you've go everything
you've got nothing at all

And one day you'll wake up
on the other side of the hill
If mother nature don't stop you
father time sure will"

I could find no better words than these to descibe the sadness written in your poem.

Quote from "Father Time surely will" by Brooke Benton

Re: Unless it's good-bye (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 3rd December 2005 @ 12:23:49 AM AEST
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i get it

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