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Array ( [sid] => 87820 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Nothing Left To Give [time] => 2005-03-17 21:01:13 [hometext] => I wrote this about losing my virginity to my (now) boyfriend, and I just lost it to him about 2 weeka ago, we;ve only been dating a month and a few days. At the time I felt like I didnt wait long enough and felt ashamed [bodytext] => Id like to think im strong,
But deep down I know im weak.
I cant even find out what im feeling,
Peace at mind is all I seek.

I have morals and beliefs,
But theyve all gone down the drain.
Ive done something so wrong,
And all I have left is shame.

Ive given you my heart,
I handed you my soul.
I wish I never let it get,
This out of control.

You own my mind,
And youve managed to gain my heart.
And now im waiting expectingly,
For me to fall apart.

Now you have my body,
I cant give you anymore.
Now im ******* terrified,
You're gonna walk out of the door.

I seemed to give in so easily,
Though I dont know why.
I really regret my act of lust,
All I do now is cry.

God frowns on me with disapproval,
And people call me a whore.
I have nothing left to give,
I dont have anything anymore.
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Nothing Left To Give

Contributed by Pats4eva7 on Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 09:01:13 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Id like to think im strong,
But deep down I know im weak.
I cant even find out what im feeling,
Peace at mind is all I seek.

I have morals and beliefs,
But theyve all gone down the drain.
Ive done something so wrong,
And all I have left is shame.

Ive given you my heart,
I handed you my soul.
I wish I never let it get,
This out of control.

You own my mind,
And youve managed to gain my heart.
And now im waiting expectingly,
For me to fall apart.

Now you have my body,
I cant give you anymore.
Now im ******* terrified,
You're gonna walk out of the door.

I seemed to give in so easily,
Though I dont know why.
I really regret my act of lust,
All I do now is cry.

God frowns on me with disapproval,
And people call me a whore.
I have nothing left to give,
I dont have anything anymore.

Copyright © Pats4eva7 ... [ 2005-03-17 21:01:13]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Nothing Left To Give (User Rating: 1 )
by Rae on Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 09:06:37 PM AEST
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aww.. i hope he doesn't leave u. i hope u the best. btw, great write.

Re: Nothing Left To Give (User Rating: 1 )
by ButchCorpuz on Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 10:44:58 PM AEST
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Virginity is not a state of body,
but rather, a state of mind.
There are womenwho are technically virgins,
yet they dress and act as if they lost their
virginity to every man in the world.
Remember, you hold your own virginity.
No one can take it from you, not even God.
Besides, I don't think God will ever frown on
you. Because you made Him smile by simply
realizing your fault and accepting it. It takes a lot of courage to do that. Most people can't
even accept their own faults.

This is a very nice poem.
Keep writing!

-Butch

Re: Nothing Left To Give (User Rating: 1 )
by ruthie1983 on Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 12:42:56 AM AEST
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interesting writing, but i hope it works out.

Re: Nothing Left To Give (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 01:29:49 PM AEST
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a deep and emotive write ,well expressed
pix xx

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