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Array ( [sid] => 8771 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => GOOD- BYE [time] => 2002-12-17 21:20:00 [hometext] => What I would have said to my mom......
If I had a chance to say GOOD BYE! [bodytext] => Theres not much time for us I know,
I need to tell you this,
Please wait don't yet go,
I need to give one last kiss,
Before you leave I have to say,
I never wanted this for you,
I wanted happiness all of your day,
never to see you blue,
Theres not much time to say Good bye,
Where did the time go,
If I think about it I'll start to cry,
but theres things you need to know,
I will always love you in my heart,
I'll keep you there for sure,
and on the time we should part,
this memory will be a blur,
So I wanted to tell you how I feel,
so you will take it with you,
where ever you go no one can steal,
My feelings that are true,
The angels are calling I can hear,
they want to take your hand,
remember don't have no fear,
they'll guide you to Holy land,
Rest assure we'll be ok,
we will meet again,
live in heaven better than you did today,
I'll see you in the end!

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GOOD- BYE

Contributed by LOWMAN613 on Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 09:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

Theres not much time for us I know,
I need to tell you this,
Please wait don't yet go,
I need to give one last kiss,
Before you leave I have to say,
I never wanted this for you,
I wanted happiness all of your day,
never to see you blue,
Theres not much time to say Good bye,
Where did the time go,
If I think about it I'll start to cry,
but theres things you need to know,
I will always love you in my heart,
I'll keep you there for sure,
and on the time we should part,
this memory will be a blur,
So I wanted to tell you how I feel,
so you will take it with you,
where ever you go no one can steal,
My feelings that are true,
The angels are calling I can hear,
they want to take your hand,
remember don't have no fear,
they'll guide you to Holy land,
Rest assure we'll be ok,
we will meet again,
live in heaven better than you did today,
I'll see you in the end!

Copyright Â© LOWMAN613 ... [ 2002-12-17 21:20:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: GOOD- BYE (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 10:30:09 PM AEST
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Awww Christina..this is just lovely...I'm sure she is reading it......and she knows how you feel....
Hugs,
Jenni

Re: GOOD- BYE (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 03:06:38 PM AEST
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This made me cry so hard tha's all i can say, i don't want to lose my mom at all and i know i will have to face this one day...it's scary...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.

Re: GOOD- BYE (User Rating: 1 )
by GEQUETSCHT on Thursday, 19th December 2002 @ 04:03:14 PM AEST
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This poem brought tears to my face. It made me realise that even if i dont get along with my mom and she says that she doesnt like me, i dont think that i could bear it to loose her. If a poem can tough some one so deeply, remember this, you definitly have somehting going for you

*°·•ali·•°*

Re: GOOD- BYE (User Rating: 1 )
by spooky on Thursday, 19th December 2002 @ 06:07:36 PM AEST
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christie,,the bible say to celebrate,, there in a better place,,,far better than here,,but still we cry and are in pain for the love that we lost,,they won't forget us they love us to much not to,,,very touching great message,,
craig s. meeks

Re: GOOD- BYE (User Rating: 1 )
by gina on Monday, 23rd December 2002 @ 08:33:34 AM AEST
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ewww very very touching , it's surely something no one get over it..... i hope it won't happen to me soon :(
sorry 4 uhavent had the chance tosay all this to ur mom ,but i m sure that she knew it

Re: GOOD- BYE (User Rating: 1 )
by gina on Monday, 23rd December 2002 @ 08:34:29 AM AEST
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ewww very very touching , it's surely something no one get over it..... i hope it won't happen to me soon :(
sorry 4 uhavent had the chance tosay all this to ur mom ,but i m sure that she knew it

Re: GOOD- BYE (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Thursday, 3rd September 2020 @ 11:46:31 PM AEST
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Thank you...
Right now I/'/m living the horror.....
Nothing worse in life.

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