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I cant feel this way forever, i wont feel this way forever, I need you more than ever now, You are my moon and stars, my sun and sky, But as for now i'll read your letter again and again, looking for the sentences where it seemed like we were slipping apart, I'll carve our names into this tree to show everybody about the couple who couldent last [comments] => 2 [counter] => 166 [topic] => 22 [informant] => ihopeyouchokex [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Untitled...?

Contributed by ihopeyouchokex on Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 05:30:50 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I'll carry this heartbreak around with me like a handbag, Because i dont intend to forgive and forget, The pain you left for me wont heal, I'll have an ever-burning scar carved in my heart from where you broke it,
I cant feel this way forever, i wont feel this way forever, I need you more than ever now, You are my moon and stars, my sun and sky, But as for now i'll read your letter again and again, looking for the sentences where it seemed like we were slipping apart, I'll carve our names into this tree to show everybody about the couple who couldent last

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Re: Untitled...? (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniels_Princess on Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 05:40:29 PM AEST
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I really liked this..Mostly cause I'm going through the same thing right now..When I read this, it was like you knew exactly what I was thinking and feeling the last few days..great write..I loved it..

Re: Untitled...? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 06:00:23 PM AEST
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My little cousent, just met her first "Love" she is only 16 years old, and right now it seems like she is going through just about exacitally what you are. This time will pass just take it slow one day at a time. I know it seems inevitable never to end but it will. Just give it time

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