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Array ( [sid] => 87626 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Whim of fears [time] => 2005-03-16 05:03:26 [hometext] => Dark Spectres of Fears and tears adorn my life>>> [bodytext] => Been lonely for a year
Am lonely, relenquished no one near

Running after false dreams
Am wasted, looking those elusive future's reflections
In life's perpetual streams

My life totally bizzare
Its me and my false apprehensions
Those gloomy imaginations and dreams to stare

Don't know I be at top
But my life now is a boring squib, a big flop
With no cheers
Juss fears
Fears of loosing it out
Loosing it out in
Blind Mad ratrace to know where
I am totally consumed
My mind, my soul tottally fumed
Fumed by thoughts of doing somethin
But my presents in rocks, its only a dark sere nothin

Sometimes when looking my shadow
I always laughs at
Laughs At the way
it Still moving a vivid hay
After vanquished by life's cruel strays

Wanna know my schedules,
Its follows no biological rules

Its tottaly churned in daily moil
am in groans off that burning turmoil

A stroll to earn a name,
Running to pull my life a fame

Once you trounced my life
With your sharp edgy knives
Trying forget
But How can I
Those wounds are still raw
With my heart ebued in agony's and wrath
These wounds now in my essence
My heart dead, no feelings.
No thoughts off life's presence

But someday, strikes a silver lining
My life's be renewed with precating rhymes
I will give my life away
To form a new way
Way to my life's pinaacle
Way to my ascent

Please send your comments:: [comments] => 3 [counter] => 192 [topic] => 21 [informant] => naveen [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Whim of fears

Contributed by naveen on Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 05:03:26 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Been lonely for a year
Am lonely, relenquished no one near

Running after false dreams
Am wasted, looking those elusive future's reflections
In life's perpetual streams

My life totally bizzare
Its me and my false apprehensions
Those gloomy imaginations and dreams to stare

Don't know I be at top
But my life now is a boring squib, a big flop
With no cheers
Juss fears
Fears of loosing it out
Loosing it out in
Blind Mad ratrace to know where
I am totally consumed
My mind, my soul tottally fumed
Fumed by thoughts of doing somethin
But my presents in rocks, its only a dark sere nothin

Sometimes when looking my shadow
I always laughs at
Laughs At the way
it Still moving a vivid hay
After vanquished by life's cruel strays

Wanna know my schedules,
Its follows no biological rules

Its tottaly churned in daily moil
am in groans off that burning turmoil

A stroll to earn a name,
Running to pull my life a fame

Once you trounced my life
With your sharp edgy knives
Trying forget
But How can I
Those wounds are still raw
With my heart ebued in agony's and wrath
These wounds now in my essence
My heart dead, no feelings.
No thoughts off life's presence

But someday, strikes a silver lining
My life's be renewed with precating rhymes
I will give my life away
To form a new way
Way to my life's pinaacle
Way to my ascent

Please send your comments::

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Re: Whim of fears (User Rating: 1 )
by Wesley_Dale_Willis on Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 08:16:33 AM AEST
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Life is rough but we all have to make the best of it. As far as fame usually a poet isn't famous until after they are dead. Unless of course you are as good as Robert Frost. You need to look at some of your grammer, I know mine is off from time to time. But it seems yours was way off. Smooth all of those smoothies out, and your on your way. Keep writing though I will read from time to time. Regards Wesley Willis...

Re: Whim of fears (User Rating: 1 )
by unrestrained19 on Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 11:42:02 AM AEST
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i really liked this poem, it may sound weird but i can totally relate even though i don't know you, they language was great, there were so many lines that jumped out at me!!!

Re: Whim of fears (User Rating: 1 )
by inoc on Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 06:38:53 AM AEST
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A clever write....a good pace...
hope you find that you arn't so lonely ...
Hope you find life your new life just around the corner!~
cheers!~

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