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Array ( [sid] => 8754 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => AdViCe To A FriEnD [time] => 2002-12-17 15:40:00 [hometext] => I ADVISE U TO DO IT IN CASE U HAVEN'T [bodytext] => To express yourself ,it's the best way
you can do it during the night or day

Anywhere,in your bed or at kitchen floor
Never satisfied,you'll ask for more

Cheapest way to bring the joy
You'll like it,trust me,don't be coy

Work of art,affection and sensation
Marking a position,creating communication

Calming down,relaxing,when in bad mood
Giving from the heart you must and should

Different styles ,all tastes satisfied
World of expresssions,sweet,wise or wild

About my first try,O don't ask
Nice,long , but tiring task

When you get used to it,you know
You'll make it better,proud to show

When all done,from pleasure you'll leap
then tired,in seconds you'll fall asleep

Wish i can tell everyone and show 'em
that nothing feels better than writing a poem [comments] => 3 [counter] => 244 [topic] => 43 [informant] => gina [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 6 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

AdViCe To A FriEnD

Contributed by gina on Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 03:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

To express yourself ,it's the best way
you can do it during the night or day

Anywhere,in your bed or at kitchen floor
Never satisfied,you'll ask for more

Cheapest way to bring the joy
You'll like it,trust me,don't be coy

Work of art,affection and sensation
Marking a position,creating communication

Calming down,relaxing,when in bad mood
Giving from the heart you must and should

Different styles ,all tastes satisfied
World of expresssions,sweet,wise or wild

About my first try,O don't ask
Nice,long , but tiring task

When you get used to it,you know
You'll make it better,proud to show

When all done,from pleasure you'll leap
then tired,in seconds you'll fall asleep

Wish i can tell everyone and show 'em
that nothing feels better than writing a poem

Copyright © gina ... [ 2002-12-17 15:40:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: AdViCe To A FriEnD (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 04:25:23 PM AEST
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This is so beautifully written gina and it has such a beautiful message behind it.....it's true sometimes nothing feels better than writing a poem....i enjoyed this alot thanks for sharing it...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.

Re: AdViCe To A FriEnD (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 10:35:06 PM AEST
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Good advice! Yes writing a poem is good medicine to the soul! Christina

Re: AdViCe To A FriEnD (User Rating: 1 )
by Opium on Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 08:32:25 AM AEST
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Writing a poem maybe does feel good as you've so beautifully described, but living them is even greater :P

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