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Array ( [sid] => 87341 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Erratic Thoughts/ Unanswered Questions [time] => 2005-03-13 13:15:39 [hometext] => Not to offend anyone, just this poets thoughts. [bodytext] => Stand up for what you believe.
Curse those who do not follow,
to the hell that the great god did make.

~~All made in his image~~
~~All made by him~~

But....some apparently
you do not seem fit to allow
into your almighty world.

What kind of god condemns
those to burning fires of hell?

How did god put all the creatures
of the earth on the ark?

~~Noah was a busy pooper-scooper~~
~~Lots of dung throwed overboard~~

Where do the dinosaurs fit in?
Did they too ride two by two
on the big floating barn?

Adam and Evil Eve
(she's the chick that chatted with gods snake)
Took a bite out of an apple
well aint that just great!

Let's see now...
Help me out with this one.
Adam and Eve
first two folks.
What's with the incest thing?

If god is all good.
Where did evil come from?
God created it!
God created evil!
Wow! That's unbelievable.

Okay, if we evolved from apes.
Why are there still apes?

Could we be transplanted here
from some unknown place?
Well, that's a novel idea
slapping me in the face.

Question upon questions I do have.

You keep giving me
empty quotes of words
which were manufactured
from unstable men.

The Earth holds the secrets.
The Universe holds the key.
Unlock the mystery
that's hidden inside of me.
For I am all that is...
All that you see....

Unanswered questions
keep gnawing at me. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 161 [topic] => 11 [informant] => deadheadpoet [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ChristianPoetry )

Erratic Thoughts Unanswered Questions

Contributed by deadheadpoet on Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 01:15:39 PM in AEST
Topic: ChristianPoetry

Stand up for what you believe.
Curse those who do not follow,
to the hell that the great god did make.

~~All made in his image~~
~~All made by him~~

But....some apparently
you do not seem fit to allow
into your almighty world.

What kind of god condemns
those to burning fires of hell?

How did god put all the creatures
of the earth on the ark?

~~Noah was a busy pooper-scooper~~
~~Lots of dung throwed overboard~~

Where do the dinosaurs fit in?
Did they too ride two by two
on the big floating barn?

Adam and Evil Eve
(she's the chick that chatted with gods snake)
Took a bite out of an apple
well aint that just great!

Let's see now...
Help me out with this one.
Adam and Eve
first two folks.
What's with the incest thing?

If god is all good.
Where did evil come from?
God created it!
God created evil!
Wow! That's unbelievable.

Okay, if we evolved from apes.
Why are there still apes?

Could we be transplanted here
from some unknown place?
Well, that's a novel idea
slapping me in the face.

Question upon questions I do have.

You keep giving me
empty quotes of words
which were manufactured
from unstable men.

The Earth holds the secrets.
The Universe holds the key.
Unlock the mystery
that's hidden inside of me.
For I am all that is...
All that you see....

Unanswered questions
keep gnawing at me.

Copyright © deadheadpoet ... [ 2005-03-13 13:15:39]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Erratic Thoughts Unanswered Questions (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 03:47:37 PM AEST
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Ohhhhh this is brilliant! I think many of us are stuck with questions like this, but there is one quote I once read that I particularly like:

"Believing without question is not faith... It is gullibility"

Or something like that anyway. I think my favourite lines on this were:

"If god is all good.
Where did evil come from?
God created it!
God created evil!
Wow! That's unbelievable."

Very nicely done. An excellent write here. I love it. :o) Thanks for sharing.

Take Care
- Becca

Re: Erratic Thoughts Unanswered Questions (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 02:48:42 AM AEST
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A masterpeice of great questions.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: Erratic Thoughts Unanswered Questions (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 11:29:24 PM AEST
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THINK OF THIS, AND I NEVER HEARD ANY ONE RELIGIOUS OR NOT ASK THIS, EVER WONDER Y GOD JUST DOESN'T GIVE SATAN A SECOND CHANCE, I MEAN IF HE'S ALL 4GIVING THEN Y NOT 4GIVE SATAN, AND IF SATAN DOESN'T WANT 2 BE FORGIVING Y NOT? WHAT DOES HE KNOW THAT WE DON'T, IMAGINE IF SATAN WAS REALY GOD? AND VICE VERSA, VERY PROCATIVE PEICE MY SISTER LAURA . . .

DORIAN CHAMBERS

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