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Array ( [sid] => 87120 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => True Happiness [time] => 2005-03-10 20:24:12 [hometext] => Semi happy, its one of my better ones... iin happiness [bodytext] => What is this, where is that?
Only once have I felt this arotic feeling
That once was with you
And only you!
Do you remember, I remember and will always and forever
When you told me you would never leave me..yet only..
Where have you gone to?
Despair and darkness return
I can feel it closing in, slowly suffocating from its steel cold jaws around my burning neck
Yet one thought of you calms my troubled heart.
As I gaze around and realize you are gone and no where in sight
I notice how alone I am, even though I am surrounded by facless people.
Life is so meaningless without your someone
And I know that you are my someone
I only stumble once as I run after you
I am sorry I hurt you
At first if you don’t succeed try, try again
May I try?
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 156 [topic] => 32 [informant] => Mallard8 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

True Happiness

Contributed by Mallard8 on Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 08:24:12 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

What is this, where is that?
Only once have I felt this arotic feeling
That once was with you
And only you!
Do you remember, I remember and will always and forever
When you told me you would never leave me..yet only..
Where have you gone to?
Despair and darkness return
I can feel it closing in, slowly suffocating from its steel cold jaws around my burning neck
Yet one thought of you calms my troubled heart.
As I gaze around and realize you are gone and no where in sight
I notice how alone I am, even though I am surrounded by facless people.
Life is so meaningless without your someone
And I know that you are my someone
I only stumble once as I run after you
I am sorry I hurt you
At first if you don’t succeed try, try again
May I try?

Copyright Â© Mallard8 ... [ 2005-03-10 20:24:12]
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Re: True Happiness (User Rating: 1 )
by Xxluckie_lynnxX on Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 09:30:41 PM AEST
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i liked this poem a whole lot .. i hope that special someone does let you try again bcause life is so meaningless withot your true happiness !
muah !

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