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Array ( [sid] => 87061 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Come Back! [time] => 2005-03-10 15:02:36 [hometext] => [bodytext] => You`re falling now, accelerating faster.
I can`t see you, but I can feel it.
Can you feel it? Are you conscious?
Are things becoming clearer?
Are things becoming brighter?
I want you to do me a favor...
Stop this mindless spinning. Take control.
People are worried about you. People are crying.
People YOU care about are distraught.
I`m distraught.
And I need you to turn around.
I need you to ignore the warmth. Ignore the calls.
Walk away.
Because if you let go now...
There`s no coming back.
This is nothing to be embarrassed about.
Yes, they will gossip.
They will point.
But they don`t know what you`ve seen.
They don`t know what you`ve been through.
They haven`t the slightest clue of why you`re here.
They can just speculate.
And that`s all they are: speculators.
You`re the superhero now. You`re the center of attention.
When you speak, people will listen.
You have a story to tell.
You have a direction to head in.
You`re life now has meaning for thousands across the planet.
And you're gonna let this slip by?
No. I won`t let you.
Who am I?
I`m your conscience, your reasoning.
I KNOW you have the power to go on.
Now get up.
That light is miles away now...
Prove to the world that you`re stronger than all of them.
Open your eyes and let every person alive know,
"I will not go quietly." [comments] => 2 [counter] => 226 [topic] => 19 [informant] => b_rand [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => InspirationalPoems )
Come Back!

Contributed by b_rand on Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 03:02:36 PM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems



You`re falling now, accelerating faster.
I can`t see you, but I can feel it.
Can you feel it? Are you conscious?
Are things becoming clearer?
Are things becoming brighter?
I want you to do me a favor...
Stop this mindless spinning. Take control.
People are worried about you. People are crying.
People YOU care about are distraught.
I`m distraught.
And I need you to turn around.
I need you to ignore the warmth. Ignore the calls.
Walk away.
Because if you let go now...
There`s no coming back.
This is nothing to be embarrassed about.
Yes, they will gossip.
They will point.
But they don`t know what you`ve seen.
They don`t know what you`ve been through.
They haven`t the slightest clue of why you`re here.
They can just speculate.
And that`s all they are: speculators.
You`re the superhero now. You`re the center of attention.
When you speak, people will listen.
You have a story to tell.
You have a direction to head in.
You`re life now has meaning for thousands across the planet.
And you're gonna let this slip by?
No. I won`t let you.
Who am I?
I`m your conscience, your reasoning.
I KNOW you have the power to go on.
Now get up.
That light is miles away now...
Prove to the world that you`re stronger than all of them.
Open your eyes and let every person alive know,
"I will not go quietly."




Copyright © b_rand ... [ 2005-03-10 15:02:36]
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Re: Come Back! (User Rating: 1 )
by rcav8ing on Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 03:30:02 PM AEST
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On the edge of my seat - moving - loved it


Re: Come Back! (User Rating: 1 )
by candysears on Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 05:16:37 PM AEST
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Well written..I clung to each word...Love the end...."I will not go quietly"...Great ending...
God Bless!




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