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Array ( [sid] => 86998 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => perfect way [time] => 2005-03-09 19:41:56 [hometext] => please comment [bodytext] => Wishing away her problems,
didn't work anymore.
She was growing up,
and starting to learn this pain.
Long nights of nothing but tears,
was starting to be regular.
Nothing took the pain away,
this hurt would never leave.
Sitting in her cold, dark room,
she found a way,
the perfect way,
to ease the blinding pain.
Just a simple, cold blade to the wrist,
and a slight movement.
The metal slipping through her skin,
made a way for the pain,
and the hurt to escape. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 450 [topic] => 13 [informant] => karmen [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

perfect way

Contributed by karmen on Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 07:41:56 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Wishing away her problems,
didn't work anymore.
She was growing up,
and starting to learn this pain.
Long nights of nothing but tears,
was starting to be regular.
Nothing took the pain away,
this hurt would never leave.
Sitting in her cold, dark room,
she found a way,
the perfect way,
to ease the blinding pain.
Just a simple, cold blade to the wrist,
and a slight movement.
The metal slipping through her skin,
made a way for the pain,
and the hurt to escape.

Copyright © karmen ... [ 2005-03-09 19:41:56]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: perfect way (User Rating: 1 )
by Xxluckie_lynnxX on Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 08:07:57 PM AEST
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Good job .. i really liked this poem .. but its sad that this girl has to find the "perfect way" to end the pain is by cutting herself .. i hope you are not going through this and if you are i am here for you

Re: perfect way (User Rating: 1 )
by hellsfallenangel on Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 10:14:44 AM AEST
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i like it its very good but i hope this isnt about u cause thats not a good way to make the pain go away trust me

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