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extreme; unwarranted;
Contributed by
electrique_poet
on
Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 12:57:32 PM in AEST
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extreme; unwarranted;
satiate your love(r) with palaver
to end time and
cultivate the relational ennui; divorce is
separation from need)
realize incontinent struggles for ambiguity;
chasten the penchant of the completely useless
(stolid acts upon which my countenance rests
because i always lose
as in the excess of my deafeat is my failure
and with what i choose
disclosure is something like a rock; like the
fleeing of a haunting apparition); in a sense
i never do enough
(though i always go too far)
extreme to extreme)
unwarranted;
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Re: extreme; unwarranted;
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by zenmind on
Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 06:09:39 PM AEST
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I loved this poem. My favorite one of yours so far. Wow, now I know I gave you a huge complement in my last comment, but this is an even bigger complement:
This poem reminds me of E.E. *****s. And E.E. *****s is my favorite poet right now, so wow, that says a lot.----side note----you should really read some of his stuff if you have not. It's freakin amazing----end of side note---- I really like the way you used your punctation, like the perenthesis, they added an extra depth to the poem, that is hard to explain, but is very strong.
I also love the words you used. Every single word was perfectly placed---beautiful, and stark (for some reason, I think that word describes this poem)
Be True,
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Re: extreme; unwarranted;
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by zenmind on
Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 06:11:32 PM AEST
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| I can't believe they cencored the name of the poet. Well his last name is like this "Rummings" only the "R", is a "C". Wow that's really complicated. |
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