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Suddenly the spell is broken
And it's just another deal
One that's all to real
Gently he kisses your eyelids
Just the feeling is enough
It's the feeling of the bloodlust
The master speaks in tongues
As he helps your life come undone
Your alter ego seems to blend into the mist
As the moonlight retreats, into a night of bliss
Yet as he sends me through the valley of doubt
I will not ask for mercy
For I have suddenly become thirsty
He forces me to submit to his will
And shows me the ultimate thrill
He shows me the way
To where darkness likes to play
As there are snakes, and snails, and puppy dog tails
That hang in the trees, of the darkened trails.
This master of mine
Has made my life all so divine.

2005 copyright by: Ronald W. Smith [comments] => 8 [counter] => 219 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Rylo [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 13 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

The Dark Life

Contributed by Rylo on Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 04:56:41 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

The master refuses to speak
Suddenly the spell is broken
And it's just another deal
One that's all to real
Gently he kisses your eyelids
Just the feeling is enough
It's the feeling of the bloodlust
The master speaks in tongues
As he helps your life come undone
Your alter ego seems to blend into the mist
As the moonlight retreats, into a night of bliss
Yet as he sends me through the valley of doubt
I will not ask for mercy
For I have suddenly become thirsty
He forces me to submit to his will
And shows me the ultimate thrill
He shows me the way
To where darkness likes to play
As there are snakes, and snails, and puppy dog tails
That hang in the trees, of the darkened trails.
This master of mine
Has made my life all so divine.

2005 copyright by: Ronald W. Smith

Copyright © Rylo ... [ 2005-03-07 16:56:41]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The Dark Life (User Rating: 1 )
by Dying_Angel on Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 05:00:37 PM AEST
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......(speechless)....

Re: The Dark Life (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 05:05:48 PM AEST
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Very nicely done. Expressive, thought-provoking and just plain beautiful. I love it.

Take Care
- Becca

Re: The Dark Life (User Rating: 1 )
by Red_October on Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 05:10:22 PM AEST
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Wow...interesting topic. Other than the fact that it scares me to death, I like the poem muchly. Again, very interesting...Tiffany J.

Re: The Dark Life (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 05:47:30 PM AEST
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Again dark poetry becomes you.
This is an awsome dark vampire piece.
I love this piece.well done.

Re: The Dark Life (User Rating: 1 )
by Nazmythian on Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 05:52:02 PM AEST
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The Dark Life indeed. Thanks to Katy for reminding me you were here ... and thanks to you for writing again with regularity ...

Well written Rylo

Nazzy ~

Re: The Dark Life (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 06:17:28 PM AEST
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gave me a chill you did good one ROn
Michelle

Re: The Dark Life (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 09:15:32 PM AEST
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A fine peice of writting a tale of horror as told

by a master . . .

Dorian Chambers

Re: The Dark Life (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 09:26:06 PM AEST
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::subscribes prozac:: sorry, only way to make sure my poetry is better, =]

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