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Heavy Handed
Contributed by
x_midnight_x
on
Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 10:07:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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Blow away this mind
hurry knowledge borrow
til reason has abandoned me
love light darkness gone
Exit life and breath
cease this beat of organ
bend break and unlearn me
throw away these eyes
Purge this skelletal frame work
of marrow,blood and salts
for feet that cannot walk no farther
heavy handed i find god.
Naked lost and empty
is the way you wish to receive me
unwashed unwised unwound
without mind or expectation
empty like an old wooden barrell
awaiting refreshing sparkle
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2005-03-07 10:07:04]
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Re: Heavy Handed
(User Rating: 1 )
by budge on
Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 10:26:15 AM AEST
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| an insightful and emotive although your lexis could improve (choice of words) |
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