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Walking Dead
Contributed by
freckle
on
Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 10:11:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Walking Dead
Night has come and with it,
the souless rise, awakened by
the thirst unquenchable
They scour the streets
hunching in the shadows
deadly desire glinting
within their evil gaze
Soundlessly, they prey
upon the pure
upon the weak
upon those
who simply have
no strength to fight
They feed, as they torment
breaking hearts
breaking lives
breaking souls
they add to their numbers
For the beaten
shall rise to beat
The bruised
shall rise to bruise
The curse continues
Into the darkness
running from the light
they hide and hate
themselves
they know one day
the price will be
eternal fire
Recklessly, they smirk
knowing until that day
they roam the streets
cursing all who cross
their vicious paths
The angels cry
God bows his head
The earth reveals
the walking dead.
Carol March 6,2005
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freckle
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Re: Walking Dead
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by DorianChambers on
Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 10:33:39 PM AEST
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u know i'm reading this poem and the charles bronson movie came 2 mind
death wish, very vivid not 2 mention how
true, great peice of writting carol like your
style . . .
Dorian Chambers
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Re: Walking Dead
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by Vampirequeen on
Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 11:29:49 PM AEST
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I thought this poem is so cool.
Great job. |
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Re: Walking Dead
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by electrique_poet on
Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 01:13:54 AM AEST
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i like your style, you paint a clear picture here, i enjoyed this one, its both true and sad
... in words electrique |
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Re: Walking Dead
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by blowfish_jane on
Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 07:33:38 AM AEST
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Ohh that was dark and amazing, nicely writen Carol i enjoyed reading this dark poem.
Jane ^_^ |
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Re: Walking Dead
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by EverlastingDawn on
Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 09:53:46 AM AEST
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| Wow. What an amazing poem. It tells a story, unique to itself. The emotions are portrayed nicely. The flow of the poem is nice, and makes the poem easier to read. Beautiful poem. Great Write. |
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Re: Walking Dead
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by secretwind on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 08:56:02 PM AEST
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"for the beaten shall rise"
that's so
beautiful.
The Wind.... |
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Re: Walking Dead
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 04:52:45 AM AEST
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| A very beautiful & intense poem..... I loved it... your talent is magnificant!!!! |
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