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What You Waiting For ?
Contributed by
Xxluckie_lynnxX
on
Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 12:24:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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What You Waiting For ??
Ill push you around
Ill kick you away
Spit on your face
And then walk away
What you going to do ?
Yell at me to stop ?
Im the one in charge
And with one blow Ill make you drop
Ill whisper in your ear
Come on, make a move
Hit me why dont you ?
I have nothing more to prove
You cower in fear
In my presence
You cant leave me
I have to teach lessons
This is what you get
For making me look bad
Ill hang the person you love the most
Your dad
You see
It doesnt matter what I do now
Hell is opening its gates for me
And to the master I shall bow
Come on
Im waiting
Waiting for your pain
To kill Im debating
Ill let you feel
The power in me
The fear in your eyes
Thats all I have to see.
So what are you waiting for ?
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Re: What You Waiting For ?
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by Quilted_rag_doll on
Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 01:21:07 PM AEST
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'Come on
I'm waiting
Waiting for your pain'
nice job...good forum, nice rhyming...i like the way you wrote it...
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Re: What You Waiting For ?
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by bttrflynajar on
Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 08:12:45 PM AEST
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ouch ...way to let the anger out!
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Re: What You Waiting For ?
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by XOashleyreneXO on
Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 09:40:38 PM AEST
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i love your poem. its a pretty good one....i know what this person is waiting for....but they're not waiting anymore...so i've heard. i can really put this poem into a situation that you're having right now...
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Re: What You Waiting For ?
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by Mallard8 on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 01:08:07 AM AEST
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Kinda scary, but super dope! I hope that you had fun writing it and it sounds like you poured your heart and soul into it... cause if you didn't your in jail for 10 to 15 years....ahah
Peace
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