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Array ( [sid] => 86523 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => high voltage [time] => 2005-03-05 14:26:05 [hometext] => [bodytext] => coming from every side
the pain exercising your brain
its pumping through your veins
the drip of poison running low
as you sit
the high voltage hits
it takes over you
as you breathe in and out
you can feel the electricity pulsing through your body
showing you the sevre reality
the ghostly feeling
as you subsitute life for death
your blood thinning
your death beginning
high voltage hits
your bones grinding in their place
your eyes blood shot
the pain releasing them from their sockets
the drumming in your ear growing
high voltage
no pain release
just the last scream escaping from your chest
as high voltage ends your life [comments] => 4 [counter] => 170 [topic] => 59 [informant] => Hannah_Heaven [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => psychoticpoems )

high voltage

Contributed by Hannah_Heaven on Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 02:26:05 PM in AEST
Topic: psychoticpoems

coming from every side
the pain exercising your brain
its pumping through your veins
the drip of poison running low
as you sit
the high voltage hits
it takes over you
as you breathe in and out
you can feel the electricity pulsing through your body
showing you the sevre reality
the ghostly feeling
as you subsitute life for death
your blood thinning
your death beginning
high voltage hits
your bones grinding in their place
your eyes blood shot
the pain releasing them from their sockets
the drumming in your ear growing
high voltage
no pain release
just the last scream escaping from your chest
as high voltage ends your life

Copyright © Hannah_Heaven ... [ 2005-03-05 14:26:05]
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Re: high voltage (User Rating: 1 )
by xtremcalibur on Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 02:36:44 PM AEST
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Very powerful write. I saw where it was taking me. I got it. Keep up the writing ~ you show endless insight through your write. Thank you for sharing.

Re: high voltage (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhymingron on Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 02:42:55 PM AEST
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Powerful write.

Re: high voltage (User Rating: 1 )
by WorthlesSanity666 on Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 06:37:24 PM AEST
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Wow. That was really good. I've always wondered what it would feel like to electricute myself. I never pictured it that painful.. Ouch! Good write. i hope you didn't try it..

Re: high voltage (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 07:55:49 PM AEST
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Hannah_Heaven`

Gastly

i loved it

Sinned

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