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Your wise hands endlessly
Embrace my body lovelessly

Moments tick by without bliss
As you are consumed with pretense
About the future that will never commence
Because past moments are frozen in the present

I have always been and will be a slave to you
As you control me through and through

Your hands rape my body with every gesture
And never lets up with any measure
Because of infinite pleasure
Applied with pressure

I am a slave to you for all of time
And all you do is tick away my life [comments] => 6 [counter] => 182 [topic] => 13 [informant] => essentially9 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Moment's Death

Contributed by essentially9 on Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 10:26:18 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Moment's Death

Your wise hands endlessly
Embrace my body lovelessly

Moments tick by without bliss
As you are consumed with pretense
About the future that will never commence
Because past moments are frozen in the present

I have always been and will be a slave to you
As you control me through and through

Your hands rape my body with every gesture
And never lets up with any measure
Because of infinite pleasure
Applied with pressure

I am a slave to you for all of time
And all you do is tick away my life

Copyright © essentially9 ... [ 2005-03-04 22:26:18]
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Re: Moment's Death (User Rating: 1 )
by Rylo on Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 10:56:35 PM AEST
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Now this one was very deep, I like this one very much. Your words are like magic in a blackened sky. Excellent writing.

Re: Moment's Death (User Rating: 1 )
by TheVoice on Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 10:59:03 PM AEST
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Such a powerful Write. Shadowed in darkness, yet showing a light.

Your writes are amazing.

The Voice

Re: Moment's Death (User Rating: 1 )
by Mangs on Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 01:34:09 AM AEST
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nice write....looks like ur some place u dont want to be....had that feeling before

Re: Moment's Death (User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 02:01:53 AM AEST
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Can't you see the niceness coming through the darkness.....Hmph....And you pick on me about mine....=]

Clark

Re: Moment's Death (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 04:02:56 AM AEST
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wow..wonderfully dark..excellent and heart touching write..:-)venkat

Re: Moment's Death (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 07:59:49 PM AEST
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This wasn't very happy, but it was very well
written and deep as someone else stated.
You don't have to be a slave to this person
anymore though you can beat these thoughts
just keep on writing them out. If you want me
to pray for you PM me and let me know.

Bobo (Joel)

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