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Array ( [sid] => 86309 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => It Breaks [time] => 2005-03-03 05:30:48 [hometext] => [bodytext] => My heart
It breaks

My soul
It screams

This feeling inside wont seem to shift
Will it be here till the day I die?

I wonder how things could be
And why they end up the way they do

Is it fate?
Is it destiny?

Or is it just bad luck?
The dice rolled wrong...

I had a dream tonight
You were there
And for an instant everything was okay again...

I touched your face
I kissed your lips
I said, "I love you"
And for once, you heard me

Then I woke
And my heart screamed
My soul turned
My body ached

What is my destiny?
What is God's plan for me?

I sure dont see it...
I'm sick of living this way
Yearning for a past love
I want her back, but I know it will never happen
So I move
Step by step
Day by day
Looking for my little peace of mind
I hope I find another

I hope
I hope
I hope

I find peace......In someones arms
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It Breaks

Contributed by TikiGodAK on Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 05:30:48 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

My heart
It breaks

My soul
It screams

This feeling inside wont seem to shift
Will it be here till the day I die?

I wonder how things could be
And why they end up the way they do

Is it fate?
Is it destiny?

Or is it just bad luck?
The dice rolled wrong...

I had a dream tonight
You were there
And for an instant everything was okay again...

I touched your face
I kissed your lips
I said, "I love you"
And for once, you heard me

Then I woke
And my heart screamed
My soul turned
My body ached

What is my destiny?
What is God's plan for me?

I sure dont see it...
I'm sick of living this way
Yearning for a past love
I want her back, but I know it will never happen
So I move
Step by step
Day by day
Looking for my little peace of mind
I hope I find another

I hope
I hope
I hope

I find peace......In someones arms

Copyright © TikiGodAK ... [ 2005-03-03 05:30:48]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: It Breaks (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 05:58:43 AM AEST
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wow this one can break a heart, shatter it and make it melt.
it's very powerful, moving. ddeper than an ocean and widder than Texas.
Huggs,
emy
Oh yeah, a masterpeice.

Re: It Breaks (User Rating: 1 )
by Hiddendarkness1705 on Tuesday, 29th August 2006 @ 03:21:38 PM AEST
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I have felt like this so many times and to have someone write such a beautiful poem about it makes me want to cry.
You are such a talented writer and I cannot wait to read more.

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