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Array ( [sid] => 86157 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => What Should Be [time] => 2005-03-01 21:40:30 [hometext] => [bodytext] => What Should Be

Hateful with spite
In this loveless life
Infected and intoxicated
With delusions
Of what should be
Fixated with reality
By what will never be

Anger and resentment
Reign supreme
In a malcontent
With no dreams

What should be
Is a dream
For those with need
What will never be
Is a nightmare
For those wishing to be free

I die infected from reality
But being dreamless
Was the real misery
In this emptiness [comments] => 5 [counter] => 180 [topic] => 48 [informant] => essentially9 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

What Should Be

Contributed by essentially9 on Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 09:40:30 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

What Should Be

Hateful with spite
In this loveless life
Infected and intoxicated
With delusions
Of what should be
Fixated with reality
By what will never be

Anger and resentment
Reign supreme
In a malcontent
With no dreams

What should be
Is a dream
For those with need
What will never be
Is a nightmare
For those wishing to be free

I die infected from reality
But being dreamless
Was the real misery
In this emptiness

Copyright © essentially9 ... [ 2005-03-01 21:40:30]
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Re: What Should Be (User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 09:44:23 PM AEST
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Real philosiphical wright Jen...very well done as normal...I like the way the rythem and idea of the poem flows...great job..

Clark

Re: What Should Be (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 09:55:05 PM AEST
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A masterpeice.
huggs,
emy

Re: What Should Be (User Rating: 1 )
by THORN on Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 03:41:56 AM AEST
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Couldn't have made it make sense or relate to this world any better. Did that make sense?

Take Care,
-xXRayeXx

Re: What Should Be (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 09:03:34 AM AEST
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Jen this was really good, i have missed your work and this just shows how much im missing out a lot .

Jane ^_^

Re: What Should Be (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 10:56:04 AM AEST
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tragic but beautifly stated sorry 4 your pain . .

Dorian Chambers

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