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Array ( [sid] => 86040 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Falling Through [time] => 2005-02-28 22:25:13 [hometext] => This is my first poem here, hope you like it. [bodytext] => Rain, a pounding dream within my aching mind
A broken flight in forgotten times
Reaching for whats never been, to grasp the realities of your deadly sins
loosing hold to thoughts untold a history of cold
Slipping into false illusions, only me and you'd be using
All you've got to make it through
To make me fall, so dark, cold in you
In your arms, a restless emotion, wreaking of this chaos, commotion
Falling through the slightest cracks and crevices of a lonely memory
to find what does not wish to exist, a world I've never known to exist
trembling in the arms of the one I love, not loved, but forever more
Break my heart, yet love me all the same
A wound I can't comprehend, it penetrates so deeply reaching for my soul and hopeless thoughts
To last evermore, one lost forever to this mirror
Into which I peer
A reflection of a horrid reality
Running but never out running my worst realities
Not enough duality,
Falling into darkness
Loosing all to fault
Hopeless in your arms
hold me, keep me warm
will you keep me in my sleep, or choose to kill me as they weep
Matters not to me
Either way the pain increases, scarring my existance further
Fall into me and shiver
hold me one last time, before I fall to wither
Only this can provoke you to my thoughts
Share my memories
Hopeless, to a yearning need
Fall into you, bleed for me
Then trembling on my wavering feet
Standing on an edge so steep
Gliding into what waits below
I'll never know
A kiss goodbye
then to fly
and hold me tight
To fall to pieces
Slipping into me
Fatality overcome
break my heart
By loving me all the same
Outrun my pain
only to begin again
Save me from myself so dark
Consume me in this cell
Falling through
I'll miss you
As I tremble in your arms and fade to black
They're never coming back
hold me, keep me from this darkness
Never let me fall
Hold me to your heart
And linger on my soul
Just so you can know
A lost and falling soul, It'll take it's toll and then you'll loose your hold
and The i'll slip away
and I'll forever fade
Loosing to this darkness, brings you to reality, now it's gone, I'll be gone, never coming back
You couldn't save me, didn't even try
Memories that scathe me
Tears of crimson blood
Run until I'm gone
And Keep me as I'm gone
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 233 [topic] => 36 [informant] => MyChemicalRomanceHeLeNa [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
Falling Through

Contributed by MyChemicalRomanceHeLeNa on Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 10:25:13 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



Rain, a pounding dream within my aching mind
A broken flight in forgotten times
Reaching for whats never been, to grasp the realities of your deadly sins
loosing hold to thoughts untold a history of cold
Slipping into false illusions, only me and you'd be using
All you've got to make it through
To make me fall, so dark, cold in you
In your arms, a restless emotion, wreaking of this chaos, commotion
Falling through the slightest cracks and crevices of a lonely memory
to find what does not wish to exist, a world I've never known to exist
trembling in the arms of the one I love, not loved, but forever more
Break my heart, yet love me all the same
A wound I can't comprehend, it penetrates so deeply reaching for my soul and hopeless thoughts
To last evermore, one lost forever to this mirror
Into which I peer
A reflection of a horrid reality
Running but never out running my worst realities
Not enough duality,
Falling into darkness
Loosing all to fault
Hopeless in your arms
hold me, keep me warm
will you keep me in my sleep, or choose to kill me as they weep
Matters not to me
Either way the pain increases, scarring my existance further
Fall into me and shiver
hold me one last time, before I fall to wither
Only this can provoke you to my thoughts
Share my memories
Hopeless, to a yearning need
Fall into you, bleed for me
Then trembling on my wavering feet
Standing on an edge so steep
Gliding into what waits below
I'll never know
A kiss goodbye
then to fly
and hold me tight
To fall to pieces
Slipping into me
Fatality overcome
break my heart
By loving me all the same
Outrun my pain
only to begin again
Save me from myself so dark
Consume me in this cell
Falling through
I'll miss you
As I tremble in your arms and fade to black
They're never coming back
hold me, keep me from this darkness
Never let me fall
Hold me to your heart
And linger on my soul
Just so you can know
A lost and falling soul, It'll take it's toll and then you'll loose your hold
and The i'll slip away
and I'll forever fade
Loosing to this darkness, brings you to reality, now it's gone, I'll be gone, never coming back
You couldn't save me, didn't even try
Memories that scathe me
Tears of crimson blood
Run until I'm gone
And Keep me as I'm gone




Copyright © MyChemicalRomanceHeLeNa ... [ 2005-02-28 22:25:13]
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Re: Falling Through (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 02:34:19 AM AEST
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i'd say ur a master poet and have a very big understanding of life and wisdom. Also that u know what luv -n-pain is.
i see inside for giveness yet a determination to right your wrongs.
It's a very powerfull mastepeice on life behind and trying to give back what u've taken from others in blindness of your own inner turmoil.
huggs,
emy
welcome.


Re: Falling Through (User Rating: 1 )
by high_on_duct_tape on Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 05:23:32 PM AEST
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Beutiful, a masterpiece! If this is ur first, I'd love to see your later ones!


Re: Falling Through (User Rating: 1 )
by upomik on Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 07:14:07 PM AEST
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cool write. my chemical romance is an awesome band. they remind me of the used though. anywhoo...keep up the great work and welcome to the site! check out some of my stuff if ya like...it's kinda depressing...ok i won't lie....it's REALLY depressing...but if ya like that kinda thing...then go for it
upomik




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