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Array ( [sid] => 85948 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Feelings I Feel Without You [time] => 2005-02-27 21:57:23 [hometext] => to someone special to me that i want back but dont know if it will ever happen. so comment and tell me what ya think. [bodytext] => Memories trickle down my spine,
i think of you, i start to cry,
there is a pain in my heart, the pain is
always near, i dont wanna be alone any longer.

I've tryed so hard to make this work,
and it always seems to turn to pain,
please dont i dont want this to end, how
can you love somebody so much that it hurts?

You can feel my hurt, and yet you dont care
if i hurt, you wont listen, you pulled your heart away
from mine, our bond seems endless now, you left
willingly i didnt push you out.

How can you just turn you back on someone you
love moving on with your life so fast, cant you see
without you i am dying, now your gone, you left now
who can i confide in?

I know you dont care, so you will never know that i cry
at night, there is just no use, if i cant have you,
where did i go wrong, i know your the one.

I wish i was back standing there looking in your eyes,
almowst crying those sweet tears i could taste, i remember
it clearly the sadness of your good-bye stare it is
stained in my memory forever.

I am sad now my love needs me no more, i've broken down
many times, sometimes i just want to die, your absence only
makes me weak, when someone you truly love leaves you, you
question did they really love me.

Your smile is only in the distance of my mind, every smile i see
it reminds me of that good-bye smile you gave me the night i left.

I remember last august what happend to me an you, those were
the dayz we werent together but still loved each other, then i
rememver that day you didnt love me anymore.

These are the many feeling i feel with out you next to me, i
am lonely and want to have someone specail in my life
once again, someone like you. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 195 [topic] => 24 [informant] => forgottenone_iam [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )
The Feelings I Feel Without You

Contributed by forgottenone_iam on Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 09:57:23 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered



Memories trickle down my spine,
i think of you, i start to cry,
there is a pain in my heart, the pain is
always near, i dont wanna be alone any longer.

I've tryed so hard to make this work,
and it always seems to turn to pain,
please dont i dont want this to end, how
can you love somebody so much that it hurts?

You can feel my hurt, and yet you dont care
if i hurt, you wont listen, you pulled your heart away
from mine, our bond seems endless now, you left
willingly i didnt push you out.

How can you just turn you back on someone you
love moving on with your life so fast, cant you see
without you i am dying, now your gone, you left now
who can i confide in?

I know you dont care, so you will never know that i cry
at night, there is just no use, if i cant have you,
where did i go wrong, i know your the one.

I wish i was back standing there looking in your eyes,
almowst crying those sweet tears i could taste, i remember
it clearly the sadness of your good-bye stare it is
stained in my memory forever.

I am sad now my love needs me no more, i've broken down
many times, sometimes i just want to die, your absence only
makes me weak, when someone you truly love leaves you, you
question did they really love me.

Your smile is only in the distance of my mind, every smile i see
it reminds me of that good-bye smile you gave me the night i left.

I remember last august what happend to me an you, those were
the dayz we werent together but still loved each other, then i
rememver that day you didnt love me anymore.

These are the many feeling i feel with out you next to me, i
am lonely and want to have someone specail in my life
once again, someone like you.




Copyright © forgottenone_iam ... [ 2005-02-27 21:57:23]
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Re: The Feelings I Feel Without You (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 10:08:44 PM AEST
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I know the feelings but ya gotta survive for your own sake. Sometimes we think it's right but I finally realized if it was right then we'd be together. You can live life with someone but u can always make it on your own. Ya jus gotta believe.
Hang tuff.
luv, huggs,
emy


Re: The Feelings I Feel Without You (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhino33 on Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 11:04:40 PM AEST
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i really can relate to this right now, great write.


Re: The Feelings I Feel Without You (User Rating: 1 )
by TheRaven on Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 01:39:49 AM AEST
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such a sad, beautiful poem...i love how i can just hear your heart spilling its soul. but i agree, keep your head up and stay strong...its not impossible.
the raven




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