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Array ( [sid] => 85919 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Girl Abused [Part one of the Girl of Troubles] [time] => 2005-02-27 18:29:26 [hometext] => When i wrote this i was amazed that i wrote it. I didnt mean to, but i did, so here it is. Its really dark, or at least alludes to something horrible. Hope no one knows how this feels [bodytext] => The moon shining brightly
Encased in darkened skies
Watch the shadows quiver slightly
See the fear in your eyes.

Feel the wind on your neck
Pumped blood runs cold
And as you begin this shadowed trek
Run if you are to be so bold

Through frigid night air
Fly through the underbrush and grave
See if you can escape his evil stare
Let us see if you are so brave.

Trip and fall upon the darkened floor
This is it, the final chance
Now look at you, your dress all torn
You don’t deserve romance

Bitter laughter fills your ears
You are all alone
And this happens every day...every year
This is all you've ever known.

He touches and bites
In no hurry to complete
Emotionless, you don’t try to fight
You’ve accepted defeat

Again and again
Night after night
You’ll always know when--
You always lose the fight.

Fallen asleep
Upon the hardwood floors,
Forest sounds, continue to creep
Imagine yourself on sunny shores
Beaches and pale sand
Sparkled with warmth and sun
Until you feel his hand
Leaving you undone.

As tears fall no more
Numb to this routine night
Mind, body and soul- all sore
She tries to fight

But in the cold forest mist
Gateway to her darkest hell
She is waiting to be kissed
And break his horrid spell.

Part one of the girl of troubles.





There are to be 3 parts in total, but only if there is want to see how it ends...
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Girl Abused [Part one of the Girl of Troubles]

Contributed by dream_protector_bp on Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 06:29:26 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



The moon shining brightly
Encased in darkened skies
Watch the shadows quiver slightly
See the fear in your eyes.

Feel the wind on your neck
Pumped blood runs cold
And as you begin this shadowed trek
Run if you are to be so bold

Through frigid night air
Fly through the underbrush and grave
See if you can escape his evil stare
Let us see if you are so brave.

Trip and fall upon the darkened floor
This is it, the final chance
Now look at you, your dress all torn
You don’t deserve romance

Bitter laughter fills your ears
You are all alone
And this happens every day...every year
This is all you've ever known.

He touches and bites
In no hurry to complete
Emotionless, you don’t try to fight
You’ve accepted defeat

Again and again
Night after night
You’ll always know when--
You always lose the fight.

Fallen asleep
Upon the hardwood floors,
Forest sounds, continue to creep
Imagine yourself on sunny shores
Beaches and pale sand
Sparkled with warmth and sun
Until you feel his hand
Leaving you undone.

As tears fall no more
Numb to this routine night
Mind, body and soul- all sore
She tries to fight

But in the cold forest mist
Gateway to her darkest hell
She is waiting to be kissed
And break his horrid spell.

Part one of the girl of troubles.





There are to be 3 parts in total, but only if there is want to see how it ends...




Copyright © dream_protector_bp ... [ 2005-02-27 18:29:26]
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Re: Girl Abused [Part one of the Girl of Troubles] (User Rating: 1 )
by purplestary on Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 07:06:09 PM AEST
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i would love to see how this ends..i will be waiting for the next two.


Re: Girl Abused [Part one of the Girl of Troubles] (User Rating: 1 )
by PuppyLove on Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 07:13:11 PM AEST
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i really liked your poem Im just gald its never happened to me though cant wait to read the rest. Ashley


Re: Girl Abused [Part one of the Girl of Troubles] (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 05:25:27 AM AEST
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really good, well done




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