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[sid] => 85805
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Miss Unpopular
[time] => 2005-02-26 13:01:26
[hometext] => Yeah that was me...
[bodytext] => Back at school I didn’t have many friends,
Because the rules I would often bend,
I would smoke & speak my mind,
I was different & others were unkind.
Girls were *****y behind my back,
I didn’t like the teachers so I’d back chat,
I wouldn’t tow the line or do homework,
Underneath my attitude they didn’t see the hurt.
As the pain grew the make up became thicker,
My life was a mess my smart remarks became quicker,
I was labelled as the naughty girl,
Who wandered about in her own little world.
I hated everyone with such a passion,
So I knew what had to happen,
I left the school as I was falling apart,
I knew that I needed a brand new start.
But I never got that start the problems went on,
All my teenage years I felt I didn’t belong,
Now I look back & I am filled with regret,
My mistakes & my past just won’t let me forget.
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[counter] => 218
[topic] => 61
[informant] => pixie
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[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 15
[ratings] => 3
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => selfstruggles
)
Miss Unpopular
Contributed by
pixie
on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 01:01:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Back at school I didn’t have many friends,
Because the rules I would often bend,
I would smoke & speak my mind,
I was different & others were unkind.
Girls were *****y behind my back,
I didn’t like the teachers so I’d back chat,
I wouldn’t tow the line or do homework,
Underneath my attitude they didn’t see the hurt.
As the pain grew the make up became thicker,
My life was a mess my smart remarks became quicker,
I was labelled as the naughty girl,
Who wandered about in her own little world.
I hated everyone with such a passion,
So I knew what had to happen,
I left the school as I was falling apart,
I knew that I needed a brand new start.
But I never got that start the problems went on,
All my teenage years I felt I didn’t belong,
Now I look back & I am filled with regret,
My mistakes & my past just won’t let me forget.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2005-02-26 13:01:26]
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Re: Miss Unpopular
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by Mangs on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 01:13:05 PM AEST
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nah...i think uve turned out just fine.. :-)
i was called "the sceintist" in school....hows that for a nerdy name...cos its always the gifted that are often ostracised...being different is what keeps me alive... |
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Re: Miss Unpopular
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 01:39:37 PM AEST
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| its too late to correct the past, but there is nothing that holds you back anymore, only you can do that. as for your poem. i think some of the rhymes are forced more than you usually have written them. |
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Re: Miss Unpopular
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by ForeverAlone on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 01:47:46 PM AEST
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Never been popular.....Have only a few people I would even call friends.....I get annoyed too much to like alot of people.....My fault I guess...Good poem though.
=]
Clark |
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Re: Miss Unpopular
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by reprobate on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 01:49:30 PM AEST
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looking back and regret that which cannot be changed - you are among friends. i think most of us have the same story in one way or another. terrific job.
thanks for sharing |
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Re: Miss Unpopular
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by poetrygirl1991 on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 02:48:20 PM AEST
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| Great poem..this is totally true bout alot of teenage girls...lifes tough...im a teenager right now and its hard .....but i get through it day by day .....i just be sure to stay out of trouble and try to make as many friends as possible so i can get through....sorry that it wasnt the same way for you. keep writing your heart ~~chrissy |
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Re: Miss Unpopular
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by AliB on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 03:38:36 PM AEST
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Great poem pixie,
This sounds just like me in my school days, unfortunately, I think I still am Miss Unpopular, or Miss Invisible, oh well that's life!
I'm glad you're feeling on the mend though, take care,
Ali xx |
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Re: Miss Unpopular
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by Jane_Doe on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 05:31:40 PM AEST
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Sucks to be harassed for not being like everyone else, but I wouldn't have it any other way. Great write, of course.
--Jane_Doe-- |
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Re: Miss Unpopular
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by bernard on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 03:06:19 AM AEST
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| Pixie, I know just how you feel. I too was a rebel at school and long after. The mistakes though were all of my own doing. great poem bernard. |
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Re: Miss Unpopular
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by DorianChambers on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 10:18:09 AM AEST
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| nice write pixie . . . Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Miss Unpopular
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 04:09:02 PM AEST
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I was Miss Unpopular at school..tho I didnt break the rules...still I was totally ignored...
Good write tho...really heart breaking...
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Miss Unpopular
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by Sirena_Degana on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 07:22:37 PM AEST
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| oh pixie.....this is so sad! BU TI LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Re: Miss Unpopular
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by pander on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 12:37:48 PM AEST
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This poem is so spot on! I'd bet there are a lot of people out there who can relate to this one.
Nice work Pix!
Luv,
Pander
xxxx |
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