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Array ( [sid] => 85786 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Am Meant To Die In Pain [time] => 2005-02-26 05:23:52 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Squeeze my heart so hard that it will bleed endlessly
Lock me up in a closet
Don't feed me for weeks
Let me suffer like I am meant to
Stab me once or twice so I feel what it's like
Wraps your hands around my throat and push until I can no longer breathe
Watch the tears pour down my face
But I'm meant to suffer from pain
Push me onto the floor
Then kick me while I'm down
Hit me so I bleed some more and leave bruises all over me
I am meant to suffer endlessly
Start a fire then throw me in
Let me burn
Feel the heat on my skin
Put me in a freezer until I turn black and blue
End up getting sick
Give me a deadly disease
That takes forever to kill you
Let me die in pain
For this was how I was meant to live
Throw me into a pit full of crocodiles
Or a pack of wolves
Let them chew me up
Give me to a lion as a treat
I will feel this horrid pain
Place a thousand leeches on my body
Let them kill me slowly
Place a black widow upon me
Let it bite me
Send its deadly venom through me
Kill me slowly
Kill me painfully
I am meant to live and die in pain
Call a vampire to suck my blood
Tie me to the train tracks and watch the train roll over me as I scream
The pain I will feel is how I'm meant to die
Make a horse real angry and let it stomp on me
Place me in a bull ring wearing red
Feed me to the sharks
Painful deaths are what I deserve
Hammer nails right through me
Saw off my arms and legs
Anything painful is meant for me
Drown me in the water
Slit my throat
Just kill me painfully
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I Am Meant To Die In Pain

Contributed by unlovedchild on Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 05:23:52 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Squeeze my heart so hard that it will bleed endlessly
Lock me up in a closet
Don't feed me for weeks
Let me suffer like I am meant to
Stab me once or twice so I feel what it's like
Wraps your hands around my throat and push until I can no longer breathe
Watch the tears pour down my face
But I'm meant to suffer from pain
Push me onto the floor
Then kick me while I'm down
Hit me so I bleed some more and leave bruises all over me
I am meant to suffer endlessly
Start a fire then throw me in
Let me burn
Feel the heat on my skin
Put me in a freezer until I turn black and blue
End up getting sick
Give me a deadly disease
That takes forever to kill you
Let me die in pain
For this was how I was meant to live
Throw me into a pit full of crocodiles
Or a pack of wolves
Let them chew me up
Give me to a lion as a treat
I will feel this horrid pain
Place a thousand leeches on my body
Let them kill me slowly
Place a black widow upon me
Let it bite me
Send its deadly venom through me
Kill me slowly
Kill me painfully
I am meant to live and die in pain
Call a vampire to suck my blood
Tie me to the train tracks and watch the train roll over me as I scream
The pain I will feel is how I'm meant to die
Make a horse real angry and let it stomp on me
Place me in a bull ring wearing red
Feed me to the sharks
Painful deaths are what I deserve
Hammer nails right through me
Saw off my arms and legs
Anything painful is meant for me
Drown me in the water
Slit my throat
Just kill me painfully




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Re: I Am Meant To Die In Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by xtremcalibur on Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 12:01:23 PM AEST
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Wow! With some work, this poem will have a great impact. I kind of got lost with a such a long list. If you compact it somewhat without losing the concept, it would have been a five star. Overall, touching.


Re: I Am Meant To Die In Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 02:03:37 PM AEST
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needs stanzas, and some verses arent really important to the piece, so are not needed to be there. some of your words seem repeated too often, even though this is a long poem. but anyway amy. if this is what you deserve, than you can do it yourself. you need no ones help.


Re: I Am Meant To Die In Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by sissy19 on Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 02:16:53 PM AEST
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While I do like this poem its sad if you really feel this nobody deserves to die painfully but then again it could just how you felt at one point in your life if thats case then I've felt that way too.




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