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Visible
In the shroud of this fog

Six feet deep
Laid to rest
"Forever" Asleep

Unintently
Miserable
To meet god

In the end
A casket as a bed
Nothing to mend

Barely
Restful
Treated as a dog

Buried ALIVE!
I'm not dead
But nobody hears my cry

Brutally
Cruel
Blinded in a smog

You put me to rest
When I was'nt dead
Deep in this darkness
Fragile
Guess my face was misread
Now I'm suppresed
Gonna die slowly
...
I dread
...
No food, no water, no light to see
I WAKE UP!
Good god it was only
A dream!
...
Then I look around
...
I'm still in the casket
...
I scream
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Six feet deep in Misery

Contributed by ForeverAlone on Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 12:03:20 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Faintly
Visible
In the shroud of this fog

Six feet deep
Laid to rest
"Forever" Asleep

Unintently
Miserable
To meet god

In the end
A casket as a bed
Nothing to mend

Barely
Restful
Treated as a dog

Buried ALIVE!
I'm not dead
But nobody hears my cry

Brutally
Cruel
Blinded in a smog

You put me to rest
When I was'nt dead
Deep in this darkness
Fragile
Guess my face was misread
Now I'm suppresed
Gonna die slowly
...
I dread
...
No food, no water, no light to see
I WAKE UP!
Good god it was only
A dream!
...
Then I look around
...
I'm still in the casket
...
I scream

Copyright © ForeverAlone ... [ 2005-02-26 00:03:20]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Six feet deep in Misery (User Rating: 1 )
by xXcrossedXx on Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 12:19:36 AM AEST
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I liked this a lot, you have a very unique way of writing. I really enjoed this and often I feel burried alive as well, wonderful write.

--amanda--

Re: Six feet deep in Misery (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 12:40:23 AM AEST
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Mercy that would be something to write about.
We must ell um make sure to put pen-n-paper in there with us. smile
Very well said.
huggs,
emy

Re: Six feet deep in Misery (User Rating: 1 )
by SimplyMe on Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 12:57:19 AM AEST
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*Reads the poem in amazement* Wow.. where to start? This poem was absolutely beautiful... believe it or not i've dream about this exact thing just about every night... i haven't though for a while since my mom gave me a Bible t put under my pillow. It helps if your a beilever in God that is. Wow this poem really got to me. It is well written though. Guess i wasn't alone in that after all....Much love

~Alucia~

Re: Six feet deep in Misery (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 05:25:20 AM AEST
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amazing, wow

Re: Six feet deep in Misery (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 12:02:27 AM AEST
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scream loud enough to be heard the first time, dont waste your oxygen. i agree with emy, might as well as be poetic while youre "dead" you of course already know i think this poem is good. i must add the title is also very good ::winks::

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