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Letting your desperate desire to be wanted blind you to the truth
You think one day she'll love you, but you are a fool

Submitting yourself time and again to her wicked, twisted whims
You sacrifice every shred of dignity you have, your very soul
Never realising she only craves your degradation

You have ached for her, cried for her, even bled for her
Telling yourself if only you give a little more you'll be worthy
If only you could see how you disgust her

You are naught to her but a toy, to abuse as she so desires
It's the shame she sees in your eyes that gets her off, nothing more
But you are a fool, and you don't see

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You Are a Fool

Contributed by LadyWynter on Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 02:00:28 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

You go to her, seeking out the hollow promise of love she offers
Letting your desperate desire to be wanted blind you to the truth
You think one day she'll love you, but you are a fool

Submitting yourself time and again to her wicked, twisted whims
You sacrifice every shred of dignity you have, your very soul
Never realising she only craves your degradation

You have ached for her, cried for her, even bled for her
Telling yourself if only you give a little more you'll be worthy
If only you could see how you disgust her

You are naught to her but a toy, to abuse as she so desires
It's the shame she sees in your eyes that gets her off, nothing more
But you are a fool, and you don't see

Copyright © LadyWynter ... [ 2005-02-24 14:00:28]
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Re: You Are a Fool (User Rating: 1 )
by Arsenic on Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 02:04:15 PM AEST
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Flee the Evil Woman eh? Ironic that just today I was thinking the same thing. :-) Good thoughts and well stated.

ARSENIC

Re: You Are a Fool (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 02:18:18 PM AEST
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another brilliant write :) keep up the good work
pix xx

Re: You Are a Fool (User Rating: 1 )
by Nazmythian on Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 03:00:35 PM AEST
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Wow .... uh, I did not expect that.
Sometimes words make me pause and just leave me stunned by their weight. Usually when I can relate to them. ... this floored me on a very personal level.

Nazzy ~
( fabulous write )

Re: You Are a Fool (User Rating: 1 )
by my-angel-has-black-wings on Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 03:47:11 PM AEST
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yes,i am a fool
good poem
steal my thoughts

Re: You Are a Fool (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 04:28:11 PM AEST
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very powerful write.
I like it alot.keep them coming.

Re: You Are a Fool (User Rating: 1 )
by Scarlett on Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 06:21:31 AM AEST
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that was excellent, thought provoking and raw.

i loved it.

Re: You Are a Fool (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 11:40:18 AM AEST
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Well said. Very well said.
Stitch

Re: You Are a Fool (User Rating: 1 )
by Twisterchaser on Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 10:57:45 PM AEST
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Deep, powerful, and a rude awakening for some.

Re: You Are a Fool (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 01:20:44 PM AEST
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You write like I wish I could. Seriously.
This is great, I can't even pick a favourite line, and once again you have conquered the flow.

A great write, you are slowly becoming one of my favourite poets.

Great write,
*hugs*
Phil xxx

Re: You Are a Fool (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 23rd May 2014 @ 06:12:19 PM AEST
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the wise man does at once what the fool does
finally, a beautiful exquisite write,

hugs n' love nessa

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