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Array ( [sid] => 85385 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You broke my pessimistic chain [time] => 2005-02-23 00:16:19 [hometext] => Another for Steph, thank you baby. I love you. [bodytext] => My mind is focused on the bad
but then you make it stray.
It's true indeed,
that all i need
is to see your face today

In my sorrow and gloom,
i saw my own doom,
then you showed me the positive way

Although not as quick as some,
to my sences i have come,
because you helped me through the fray.

You"ve spoke no words to me,
but in your deeds my eyes do see,
that you care more than words could portray.

Still my battle is far from over,
but you can be my four leaf clover,
together we'll feel no dismay.

Only you my heart will serve,
it's a gift you truely do deserve,
your kindness is a debt i'll gladly repay

Now i'm certain that it's true,
that you love me and i love you,
but for now there's nothing more to say. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 177 [topic] => 2 [informant] => tin [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

You broke my pessimistic chain

Contributed by tin on Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 12:16:19 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

My mind is focused on the bad
but then you make it stray.
It's true indeed,
that all i need
is to see your face today

In my sorrow and gloom,
i saw my own doom,
then you showed me the positive way

Although not as quick as some,
to my sences i have come,
because you helped me through the fray.

You"ve spoke no words to me,
but in your deeds my eyes do see,
that you care more than words could portray.

Still my battle is far from over,
but you can be my four leaf clover,
together we'll feel no dismay.

Only you my heart will serve,
it's a gift you truely do deserve,
your kindness is a debt i'll gladly repay

Now i'm certain that it's true,
that you love me and i love you,
but for now there's nothing more to say.

Copyright © tin ... [ 2005-02-23 00:16:19]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: You broke my pessimistic chain (User Rating: 1 )
by Beniam on Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 12:32:31 AM AEST
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Brother, you've got it bad. Good write.

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