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Nightmares
Contributed by
Les4567
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Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 07:49:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Shattering windows
From deafening screams
Tossing and truning
Fighting these dreams
They won't go away
And won't leave me be
They're after me
Haunting me in my sleep
I thrash back and forth
In my big empty bed
Everytime I close my eyes
I seem to see red
In every nightmare
I say my last goodbyes
No one comes to rescue me
Nobody hears my cries
I wake up
In a pool of sweat
I feel as though I'm in debt
Debted to the devil
He must have stole
My soul
Hours pass
As these dreadful images
Play out
My eyelids are like
A movie screen
Agonising horror, flashes
Again and again
Capturing every last scream
When will this be over?
I need desperately
To escape
These horrific dreams
We call
Nightmares.
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Les4567
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Re: Nightmares
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 07:54:34 PM AEST
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| Great write. I really liked the flow. I was alse able to sense your emotion in this piece so clearly. Good work. |
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Re: Nightmares
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by lilsprtygrl21 on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 08:38:21 PM AEST
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| Nice job. You were very descriptive and that helped me paint a picture. Keep it up! |
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Re: Nightmares
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by mina-1 on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 07:54:51 AM AEST
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Great write Leslie.
I hope these awful nightmares vanish real soon.
Ur poem was descriptive and very well written.
Keep up the great work. Will be looking out 4 more of ur writes |
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Re: Nightmares
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by moriahk on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 03:52:54 PM AEST
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| this is a really awsome poem! |
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Re: Nightmares
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by Nazmythian on
Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 01:22:26 PM AEST
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I'd be willing to bet everyone could relate to this. I know I can.
( watch your spelling ... and typos, they can detract from an other wise fabulous poem )
Another good write Leslie.
Nazmythian ~ |
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