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Crushing lifes
Suspected suspetion
Ending all
Predicted convictions

You break away
Trying to feel
Nothing to say
Scabs start to peel

Foreseeing the forgotten
Finding what was lost, while
Questioning the softened
Looking for all
Unscaved wounds, rotten

You end the day
By making a deal
Slicing away
You look at your knife as if it's satan
As I write your story
With my quill

Unseen circumstance
Choosing your next move
Redeeming trance
Cutting your veins with your
Routine Romance

As you open a new wound
One cut, one too deep
No future...soon
As your blood seeps
You think about your deal
...
Talking your own life
Without your will [comments] => 5 [counter] => 239 [topic] => 13 [informant] => ForeverAlone [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Routine Romance

Contributed by ForeverAlone on Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 11:00:57 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Trusted Intuition
Crushing lifes
Suspected suspetion
Ending all
Predicted convictions

You break away
Trying to feel
Nothing to say
Scabs start to peel

Foreseeing the forgotten
Finding what was lost, while
Questioning the softened
Looking for all
Unscaved wounds, rotten

You end the day
By making a deal
Slicing away
You look at your knife as if it's satan
As I write your story
With my quill

Unseen circumstance
Choosing your next move
Redeeming trance
Cutting your veins with your
Routine Romance

As you open a new wound
One cut, one too deep
No future...soon
As your blood seeps
You think about your deal
...
Talking your own life
Without your will

Copyright © ForeverAlone ... [ 2005-02-20 23:00:57]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Routine Romance (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 11:04:54 PM AEST
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Powerful write....especially the ending.

Re: Routine Romance (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 11:17:58 PM AEST
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i liked this one a lot clark. i especially liked the first stanza.

Re: Routine Romance (User Rating: 1 )
by lauren0929 on Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 11:21:17 PM AEST
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good poem,great ending

Re: Routine Romance (User Rating: 1 )
by heartquake on Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 12:40:19 AM AEST
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Poetry, to me is all about creating a scene with words so adjectives are the best way to go, with that said, you do an incredible job describing feelings with just 2 words, a lot of people can't do that with an entire poem.... you get it done quick and do it all over again several times, great job

Re: Routine Romance (User Rating: 1 )
by Les4567 on Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 11:52:50 AM AEST
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You are an excellent writer and talented.. i agree with earthquake you can describe feelings in 2 words that some people (including me) cant do in an entire poem...keep up the good work
nice write
~Leslie

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