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Array ( [sid] => 84974 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Smile, Broken Man [time] => 2005-02-19 17:34:02 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Smiles
Like burning fires
What I need it to get through the cold
And the dark times when I've lost hold

Laughs
Like chains that trap
What I need to fix a broken heart
And stop me from falling apart

Hugs
Like addicting drugs
What I need to get my fix
And undo all previous tricks

You
Everything I need to keep from being blue
Someone that helps me stand
And does'nt care how much I cry and fall
Because she'll catch me
Before I land
With just a touch
...
Of her hand
...
A Fallen Angel
Stoping the sands
Of time
For her broken man
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Smile, Broken Man

Contributed by ForeverAlone on Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 05:34:02 PM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry

Smiles
Like burning fires
What I need it to get through the cold
And the dark times when I've lost hold

Laughs
Like chains that trap
What I need to fix a broken heart
And stop me from falling apart

Hugs
Like addicting drugs
What I need to get my fix
And undo all previous tricks

You
Everything I need to keep from being blue
Someone that helps me stand
And does'nt care how much I cry and fall
Because she'll catch me
Before I land
With just a touch
...
Of her hand
...
A Fallen Angel
Stoping the sands
Of time
For her broken man

Copyright © ForeverAlone ... [ 2005-02-19 17:34:02]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Smile, Broken Man (User Rating: 1 )
by MLCstar on Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 07:13:06 PM AEST
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Creatively dark. I enjoyed how you structured your poem with the emphasised first word all alone. Impressive technique.

Re: Smile, Broken Man (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 09:07:38 PM AEST
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not broken, just bent beyond repair. fantastico. yo me gusta el poema. this reminded me of trapt, except their thing was hollow man.

Re: Smile, Broken Man (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 09:32:10 PM AEST
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very beautiful peice of essensial writting . . .

Dorian Chambers

Re: Smile, Broken Man (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 09:29:11 AM AEST
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wonderful...

Re: Smile, Broken Man (User Rating: 1 )
by heartbroken4ever on Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 06:12:50 PM AEST
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one word Beautiful
Love you
Amber

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