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And dream of pleasant thoughts
No dont weep my little one
To keep you safe I have fought
Things will be well again
But give it yet more time
You dont need that knife
Your life is just fine
You dont need to smoke that blunt
Please dont put it to your lips
Dont forget all your dreams
Dont let it end like this
You dont need to be like them
No dont follow the crowd
Fighting back and saying no
Is what makes your voice loud
We all love you for who you are
You need not try to impress us
You're our shining star
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Dont Give In

Contributed by Daniels_Princess on Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 06:19:47 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

Sleep dear child
And dream of pleasant thoughts
No dont weep my little one
To keep you safe I have fought
Things will be well again
But give it yet more time
You dont need that knife
Your life is just fine
You dont need to smoke that blunt
Please dont put it to your lips
Dont forget all your dreams
Dont let it end like this
You dont need to be like them
No dont follow the crowd
Fighting back and saying no
Is what makes your voice loud
We all love you for who you are
You need not try to impress us
You're our shining star
Please dont give into the worlds lust

Copyright © Daniels_Princess ... [ 2005-02-18 18:19:47]
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Re: Dont Give In (User Rating: 1 )
by wolfman on Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 06:29:23 PM AEST
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truly a magnificent poem, I do believe that there are many suicidal poets here that could do good in reading this one it shows that therer is no need to do any of the things they do. I know thqat this sounds odd coming from me ( a man who also writes dark and suicidal poems too.) but its true if I was almost at my end and I read this it would make me feel better, thank you for posting it and please recomend this for your friends, I will.

wolfman

Re: Dont Give In (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 06:38:24 PM AEST
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Awesome write. I think this poem will help a lot of people. Good work.

Re: Dont Give In (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniels_Princess on Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 06:40:46 PM AEST
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Thank you I really appreciate that..When I write I try to write about things I know, or things Ive been through..and its something Ive currently been going through. I really appreciate your comment

Re: Dont Give In (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniels_Princess on Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 06:42:29 PM AEST
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Thank you Marisa, thats very kind of you

Re: Dont Give In (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 10:26:27 PM AEST
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Nice poem, this is sure to help someone out.

Scott

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