Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	02-June 21:10:31 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 84773 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Undisturbed Peace Pt. 1 [time] => 2005-02-17 18:06:27 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I put the liquid to my lips
And slowly take it in tiny sips
As it burns as it goes down
I stumble and fall to the ground
My life is fading, I barely breathe
Finally I can rest in undisturbed peace
My life is showing before my eyes
There were so many things I despised
I once had love, but let it go
My darkest secrets still don’t show
I have my scars from all my cuts
From all the times life was too much
And with each cut I know I escaped
The life I lived that was nothing more than fake
I was a disturbed soul lost in this world
But deep inside me lived a small little girl
I saw the ones that I thought were friends
But how foolish was I, even they came to an end
I close my eyes and disappear into the dark
My breathing stops as well as my heart
The time has come for me to leave
And I can finally rest in undisturbed peace.
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 234 [topic] => 36 [informant] => cuttersangel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Undisturbed Peace Pt. 1

Contributed by cuttersangel on Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 06:06:27 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

I put the liquid to my lips
And slowly take it in tiny sips
As it burns as it goes down
I stumble and fall to the ground
My life is fading, I barely breathe
Finally I can rest in undisturbed peace
My life is showing before my eyes
There were so many things I despised
I once had love, but let it go
My darkest secrets still don’t show
I have my scars from all my cuts
From all the times life was too much
And with each cut I know I escaped
The life I lived that was nothing more than fake
I was a disturbed soul lost in this world
But deep inside me lived a small little girl
I saw the ones that I thought were friends
But how foolish was I, even they came to an end
I close my eyes and disappear into the dark
My breathing stops as well as my heart
The time has come for me to leave
And I can finally rest in undisturbed peace.

Copyright Â© cuttersangel ... [ 2005-02-17 18:06:27]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: Undisturbed Peace Pt. 1 (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 12:28:47 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Another good write somehow I missed this
one. I can definitely relate to this as I too have
drank to escape from my problems and it
doesn't work at all. I thought this was very
well written poem and I liked how it flowed.

Bobo (Joel)

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. Â©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright Â© to their submitter. All the rest Copyright Â© 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com