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Freezing air but you keep me warm

I turn to you each and every night
or maybe in the day to be out of sight

Relief,comfort,peace you offer
A world of dreams sweet or bitter

The last thing that see my eyes
Watching me as my body lies

No pain can touch me,no wound no harm
As you hold me tight i'm in safe arms

Sometimes I reach the edge and fall
But always come back as I hear you call

Just the two of us,or should i say one
Together we stay till rise the sun

Forced to leave,wish more i could stay
There you remain waiting me all day

Promise i'll return as soon as i can
To find this pleasure again and again

Aways this thought crosses my head
What would i do if i didn't have a BED [comments] => 6 [counter] => 191 [topic] => 43 [informant] => gina [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

I-N-D-I-S-P-E-N-S-A-B-L-E

Contributed by gina on Thursday, 12th December 2002 @ 07:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Lightning,thunder,crazy storm
Freezing air but you keep me warm

I turn to you each and every night
or maybe in the day to be out of sight

Relief,comfort,peace you offer
A world of dreams sweet or bitter

The last thing that see my eyes
Watching me as my body lies

No pain can touch me,no wound no harm
As you hold me tight i'm in safe arms

Sometimes I reach the edge and fall
But always come back as I hear you call

Just the two of us,or should i say one
Together we stay till rise the sun

Forced to leave,wish more i could stay
There you remain waiting me all day

Promise i'll return as soon as i can
To find this pleasure again and again

Aways this thought crosses my head
What would i do if i didn't have a BED

Copyright © gina ... [ 2002-12-12 19:40:00]
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Re: I-N-D-I-S-P-E-N-S-A-B-L-E (User Rating: 1 )
by Ronald on Thursday, 12th December 2002 @ 09:52:28 PM AEST
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This poem is definitelya masterpiece of yours. Good job Gina!

Re: I-N-D-I-S-P-E-N-S-A-B-L-E (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Thursday, 12th December 2002 @ 10:23:32 PM AEST
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Great write!!! You had me there Gina... :>)
Jenni

Re: I-N-D-I-S-P-E-N-S-A-B-L-E (User Rating: 1 )
by yellow_sundragon on Friday, 13th December 2002 @ 12:02:20 AM AEST
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Haha! You gots me!! I thought it was a guy you weres talking about, but it was a bed!

Yay for the beds! They finally gots a poem!!

It's awesome...

YS

Re: I-N-D-I-S-P-E-N-S-A-B-L-E (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Saturday, 14th December 2002 @ 11:19:11 AM AEST
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Oh lol....i thought the same thing...i thought this was talkin about a man to LOL sheesh...this was a good write i enjoyed it alot thanks for sharing it...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.

Re: I-N-D-I-S-P-E-N-S-A-B-L-E (User Rating: 1 )
by Opium on Sunday, 15th December 2002 @ 08:12:07 AM AEST
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It doesn't matter if it was a man or a bed you know, what matters is that they get to hold you all night long and makes you feel safe and wander throu your head, while there are others in another corner of their own beds thinking about you :P

Re: I-N-D-I-S-P-E-N-S-A-B-L-E (User Rating: 1 )
by spooky on Monday, 23rd December 2002 @ 07:00:34 AM AEST
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beautifully written ,,,with heart,,,great message,,,it does make a person think

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