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Array ( [sid] => 84647 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Behinf These Green Eyes..very long [time] => 2005-02-16 16:59:12 [hometext] => Kinda weird..but..just what came to my mind, kinda long too..would appreciate any feedback. [bodytext] => Behind these green eyes
I hide a lie
That kills me inside
And if you look
You just might find out
Who I really am
Everyday I put on this smile
And learn to pretend
Im crying all the while
I am my only friend
And behind these green eyes
Only I know the real me
Only I can really see
What lies beneath
What I hide
What I side with
All behind these green eyes
That I cry with
I dare you to try and find it
Should I take another hit
Drop the ceiling
My world is spinning
And Im concealing
What I really feel
Its not real to me anymore
My heart is sealed from the world
Learn to steal from the world
My depth will make your fingers curl
Pick up the first stone
And cast it at me
So insane but in actuality
Im the only sane one
Only one not holding a gun
Cursing the sun for rising
Making it impossible to be so sly
And so slick, like this
End it all in the time it takes you to blink
Mak you think
All with these green eyes
My mysterious disguise
Cant you see what lies beneath yet?
Cant you feel the sting, taste the sweat?
Im eveil, im potent
Thats why I get these sudden motions
Its my form of a poem
Sweet and delicate
Yet tearin your soul up
Fallin back to the ground and foldin
Giving in cause you just cant hold on
Behind these green eyes
I hide your lies
And it kills me inside
And when I look
Ill finally see who I really am
The broken girl
With the broken world
Who has nothing left
Can you see the pain Ive kept?
Hear my thoughts, yet not the words I speak
With these green eyes
I can make things so discrete
Keep it a secret why
Our eyes should never meet
Never know when Im beat
Cause the heat is always on
Eyes watching me
Tryin to break me
Finding my every flaw
Everytime Im wrong
Can you hear my pleading song?
The violin in the background
My mind is not sound
But I wont let a knife
Rock against my wrist again
Wont let it all end like this
Wont cut into my skin
Even though I can barely handle this ****
Cant let the Devil win
So look into my green eyes
And find all my lies
Every secret I must hide
And try to accept me
For who I really am
The person lost within
And try to love me
Please don't shove me away again
Behind these green eyes
I am my only confident
Yes, my only friend [comments] => 3 [counter] => 202 [topic] => 64 [informant] => Daniels_Princess [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ambiguous )
Behinf These Green Eyes..very long

Contributed by Daniels_Princess on Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 04:59:12 PM in AEST
Topic: ambiguous



Behind these green eyes
I hide a lie
That kills me inside
And if you look
You just might find out
Who I really am
Everyday I put on this smile
And learn to pretend
Im crying all the while
I am my only friend
And behind these green eyes
Only I know the real me
Only I can really see
What lies beneath
What I hide
What I side with
All behind these green eyes
That I cry with
I dare you to try and find it
Should I take another hit
Drop the ceiling
My world is spinning
And Im concealing
What I really feel
Its not real to me anymore
My heart is sealed from the world
Learn to steal from the world
My depth will make your fingers curl
Pick up the first stone
And cast it at me
So insane but in actuality
Im the only sane one
Only one not holding a gun
Cursing the sun for rising
Making it impossible to be so sly
And so slick, like this
End it all in the time it takes you to blink
Mak you think
All with these green eyes
My mysterious disguise
Cant you see what lies beneath yet?
Cant you feel the sting, taste the sweat?
Im eveil, im potent
Thats why I get these sudden motions
Its my form of a poem
Sweet and delicate
Yet tearin your soul up
Fallin back to the ground and foldin
Giving in cause you just cant hold on
Behind these green eyes
I hide your lies
And it kills me inside
And when I look
Ill finally see who I really am
The broken girl
With the broken world
Who has nothing left
Can you see the pain Ive kept?
Hear my thoughts, yet not the words I speak
With these green eyes
I can make things so discrete
Keep it a secret why
Our eyes should never meet
Never know when Im beat
Cause the heat is always on
Eyes watching me
Tryin to break me
Finding my every flaw
Everytime Im wrong
Can you hear my pleading song?
The violin in the background
My mind is not sound
But I wont let a knife
Rock against my wrist again
Wont let it all end like this
Wont cut into my skin
Even though I can barely handle this ****
Cant let the Devil win
So look into my green eyes
And find all my lies
Every secret I must hide
And try to accept me
For who I really am
The person lost within
And try to love me
Please don't shove me away again
Behind these green eyes
I am my only confident
Yes, my only friend




Copyright © Daniels_Princess ... [ 2005-02-16 16:59:12]
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Re: Behinf These Green Eyes..very long (User Rating: 1 )
by xXcrossedXx on Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 05:04:01 PM AEST
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Ok, I love this poem.. soo much. I don't know any word that can describe it this is as close to me as any poem that I've ever made. This was.. I don't know. Wonderful Wonderful job, absolutely outstanding.. I don't know what else to say..

xxamandaxx
..terrific..


Re: Behinf These Green Eyes..very long (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniels_Princess on Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 05:08:29 PM AEST
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Thank you very much, it was very kind of you. It was what I was going through, and Im trying to get over a bad "habit', i guess you could call it..Im glad you could relate to it and understand it..lol..everyone else thats read it just said Im really weird..


Re: Behinf These Green Eyes..very long (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 10:37:43 PM AEST
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This is excellent. I hope things are getting better for you.

Scott




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