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Array ( [sid] => 84618 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => *>* Broken man *<* [time] => 2005-02-16 12:56:28 [hometext] => [bodytext] => i can think of younger days,
when the world was so innocent and pure,
happiness was a common emotion,
if only time could repeat itself to how it was before,

loving you was like my dream come true,
realising love could feel so good,
learning that loving was so easy,
i always thought learning love would be a thing i never could,
and now im looking into shinning photos,
old smiles glimmer back at me,
both our eyes were full with paradise,
optimistic and destiny hungry,

i never thought the bullet would bite like this,
it was so quick and so easy,
now i feel the pain of the shot,

oh i could think of those lucky times,
when i got to hold you in my arms,
when we could lie back and think of the days ahead,
the days that i am now facing all alone,

i wonder what your'e doing now,
i wonder if your'e thinking of me,
as you hold the ring you buried at the bottom of your jewlerry box,
i wonder if your'e feeling guilty,

if i am charged in court with loving you with all my might,
or for holding you up as the star in my sky,
then i am guilty as charged,
that is a sentance i will hold till the moment i die...

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*>* Broken man *<*

Contributed by in2thetwilightzone on Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 12:56:28 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

i can think of younger days,
when the world was so innocent and pure,
happiness was a common emotion,
if only time could repeat itself to how it was before,

loving you was like my dream come true,
realising love could feel so good,
learning that loving was so easy,
i always thought learning love would be a thing i never could,
and now im looking into shinning photos,
old smiles glimmer back at me,
both our eyes were full with paradise,
optimistic and destiny hungry,

i never thought the bullet would bite like this,
it was so quick and so easy,
now i feel the pain of the shot,

oh i could think of those lucky times,
when i got to hold you in my arms,
when we could lie back and think of the days ahead,
the days that i am now facing all alone,

i wonder what your'e doing now,
i wonder if your'e thinking of me,
as you hold the ring you buried at the bottom of your jewlerry box,
i wonder if your'e feeling guilty,

if i am charged in court with loving you with all my might,
or for holding you up as the star in my sky,
then i am guilty as charged,
that is a sentance i will hold till the moment i die...

Copyright © in2thetwilightzone ... [ 2005-02-16 12:56:28]
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Re: *>* Broken man *<* (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 01:08:40 PM AEST
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very beautiful
Michelle

Re: *>* Broken man *<* (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 01:13:06 PM AEST
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Don't we all have those moments of wondering? Wish I didn't though.
Good stuff.
Stitch

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