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Array ( [sid] => 84557 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => ~*Thoughts Of Killing Me*~ [time] => 2005-02-15 18:41:54 [hometext] => enjoy! [bodytext] => sitting in the darkness
surrounded by empty thoughts
i'm hopelessly hopeless
wondering why i gace you a shot

I hate you
I'm angry
and you're happy
I hate you

I want you out of my life
Don't make me grab the knife
get out of my way
just fade

why wont you just kill me
ease my pain
please,just erase me
let me rain

this is a slow
painful death
too slow
not painfull enough death

catch me
kill me
make me believe
let me leave

i wanna die
i'm loosing my mind
i always cry
and no one will ever find
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 174 [topic] => 21 [informant] => savedbydeath [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 16 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

~*Thoughts Of Killing Me*~

Contributed by savedbydeath on Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 06:41:54 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

sitting in the darkness
surrounded by empty thoughts
i'm hopelessly hopeless
wondering why i gace you a shot

I hate you
I'm angry
and you're happy
I hate you

I want you out of my life
Don't make me grab the knife
get out of my way
just fade

why wont you just kill me
ease my pain
please,just erase me
let me rain

this is a slow
painful death
too slow
not painfull enough death

catch me
kill me
make me believe
let me leave

i wanna die
i'm loosing my mind
i always cry
and no one will ever find

Copyright © savedbydeath ... [ 2005-02-15 18:41:54]
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Re: ~*Thoughts Of Killing Me*~ (User Rating: 1 )
by cheech on Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 10:20:30 PM AEST
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feeling it all the time.but there is a difference between reality and emotions,don't let ur feelings take over,or else u'll end up psycho,good write,love ya

cheech

Re: ~*Thoughts Of Killing Me*~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 12:01:20 AM AEST
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::gives you a new brain for you to have different thoughts:: loved your poem.

Re: ~*Thoughts Of Killing Me*~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Stonedraider23 on Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 12:52:57 AM AEST
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great write this is how i feel and sh*t after u let me fall plz help ease my pain and love me once again

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