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Love is Confusing
Contributed by
saveMEfromMYSELF
on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 08:53:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Ive known you since before I can remember We were small children then
I cannot think of the last time we spoke It must have been forever when
You ate cookies at my house And we peed in the neighbors pool
We lost track of time, And forgot about school
But now I find you here On my porch, outside my home
And I find myself heart broken You were my first love, but I found another
My feelings come back One step at a time
Your presence makes me weak And your voice makes me cry
Your eyes are impenetrable And your touch just too soft
But I have someone else Whose name I cant think of
Why did you have to come back? Youve confused me beyond the limits
Now Im stuck in this lie Thank you friend of mine
My heart sings when youre near But my hand just wants to punch you
I know that its right, even though its wrong Why do I have to love you?
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Re: Love is Confusing
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 08:59:32 PM AEST (User
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| This is very sweet. I especially loved the ending. Beautiful work. |
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Re: Love is Confusing
(User Rating: 1 ) by jonbalser on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 09:28:25 PM AEST (User
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| i really like this poem i mean it happens to more ppl then what you think, like myself, i love my ex who i have a daughter with, but my frist love has came back to me, and i don't know for sure who i want to work things out with |
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Re: Love is Confusing
(User Rating: 1 ) by LaDyD on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 09:35:34 PM AEST (User
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| This was a beautiful poem....it sucks when an old love comes back...=/ |
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Re: Love is Confusing
(User Rating: 1 ) by CurtisC on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 10:09:18 PM AEST (User
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in that very situation right now, well kinda..started talking with my first and only real love again recently and it's pretty crazy :)
beautiful write though, i loved reading it :)
Curtis |
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Re: Love is Confusing
(User Rating: 1 ) by malinsinbigler on
Friday, 30th December 2011 @ 09:13:41 PM AEST (User
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| I love the flow of this poem, very good work |
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