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[title] => Kissing the Wolf
[time] => 2005-02-14 11:32:52
[hometext] => Three words inspired me Friday ... this became of them
[bodytext] => I didn’t quite know how to intro this …
I was inspired by the three words of the title. From there, I drew on fact and fantasy, what I know and what I wish I knew. It … presented itself …as two poems at once, kind of like two voices speaking at the same time. But in truth it was one voice, speaking to two audiences, sort of a Shakespearean Mac Beth kind of thing. The italicized lines are soliloqual, much like mental sidebars, or … Whispers to a confidant ~
I think holding true to meter was more challenging than maintaining the rhyme scheme
~ Anyway … before I lose you … here it is ~
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
She looked strangely out of place
With her soft angelic face
And the eyes of a predator within
The knowing was too much for me
I had to look away
She asked, “What is it you see
Every time you look at me?”
Once she had finally caught my gaze again
I stood frozen in the moment
Afraid of what I’d say
“I can see it in your eyes
And you know you can’t disguise
The hint of pain you show me now and then.”
Perhaps I’d hidden from the truth
This time for much too long
I said, “You’re not what you seem
There is something else that gleams
Hiding behind the smile you show to men”
She tried hard to convince herself
The chance I might be wrong
“I see a passion there that burns
Every time your head is turned
Concealing such a gift should be a sin”
I’d stepped too far over the line
To think of using tact
As she shed her sheeply clothes
And became what she feared most
I’m certain that she did it with a grin
I touched my lips to hers and found ~
The Wolf was kissing back
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Kissing the Wolf
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Nazmythian
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Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 11:32:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I didn’t quite know how to intro this …
I was inspired by the three words of the title. From there, I drew on fact and fantasy, what I know and what I wish I knew. It … presented itself …as two poems at once, kind of like two voices speaking at the same time. But in truth it was one voice, speaking to two audiences, sort of a Shakespearean Mac Beth kind of thing. The italicized lines are soliloqual, much like mental sidebars, or … Whispers to a confidant ~
I think holding true to meter was more challenging than maintaining the rhyme scheme
~ Anyway … before I lose you … here it is ~
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
She looked strangely out of place
With her soft angelic face
And the eyes of a predator within
The knowing was too much for me
I had to look away
She asked, “What is it you see
Every time you look at me?”
Once she had finally caught my gaze again
I stood frozen in the moment
Afraid of what I’d say
“I can see it in your eyes
And you know you can’t disguise
The hint of pain you show me now and then.”
Perhaps I’d hidden from the truth
This time for much too long
I said, “You’re not what you seem
There is something else that gleams
Hiding behind the smile you show to men”
She tried hard to convince herself
The chance I might be wrong
“I see a passion there that burns
Every time your head is turned
Concealing such a gift should be a sin”
I’d stepped too far over the line
To think of using tact
As she shed her sheeply clothes
And became what she feared most
I’m certain that she did it with a grin
I touched my lips to hers and found ~
The Wolf was kissing back
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Nazmythian
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Re: Kissing the Wolf
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by FleurdeSang on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 11:49:21 AM AEST
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Words of a true poet, cherie... Incredible piece. Such depth and emotion... The shedding of sheep's clothing, and revealing what is truly within... Amazing. You have emphasized your talent by sharing this.... It is always growing and becoming more vibrant.. Lovely images, excellent flow, just utterly enchanting all the way!! LOVED IT!!
Ma douce chasseur, you never fail to steal my breath and words... Absoultely beautiful. Merci beaucoup for exposing your soul, and revealing your inner thoughts... always a pleasure taking a stroll within your mind. All my love!! hope to talk with you soon. Ciao bello. Forever,
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Re: Kissing the Wolf
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by Stitch on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 11:52:12 AM AEST
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Oh Nazzy. This could almost be a prequel for that flower series of yours. You are such a consistently good poet. There are few here like you.
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Re: Kissing the Wolf
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by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 12:06:00 PM AEST
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Consistantly good is right...
and most times great, like this one.
I like the whole set up here.
Very well done my friend
Barkeep!!
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Re: Kissing the Wolf
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by pixie on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 12:14:21 PM AEST
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me speechless, that was amazing my friend :)
*hugs*
pix xx |
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Re: Kissing the Wolf
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by dtborchert on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 01:38:53 PM AEST
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| This poem is nothing short of amazing... |
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Re: Kissing the Wolf
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by lostinmyself on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 01:42:56 PM AEST
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Ooooh, I like this.
It reminds me of something, though I cannot recall what.
Anyway, this made me smile.
Another fantastic poem by you.
Keep it up.
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: Kissing the Wolf
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 01:53:51 PM AEST
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yes it is words from a true poet .
Naz you amaze me with your writes.
I could learn alot from your writng.
once again you pout done yourself.
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Re: Kissing the Wolf
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by wolfman on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 02:05:05 PM AEST
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bravo, bravo. this was an amazing poem I am speechless...I am with out speech. the level of imigery here is perfect, I loved how you seperated the thought patterns, it added to the intensity of it. it is amazing how you set it up the she is not happy with whaty she is and is trying to hide it but cant and then finaty stops trying to be something eles and is just herself, and the fact the you were there for her when she did just made it all the better. very very good writ, please do post again, be strong and God bless.
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Re: Kissing the Wolf
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by zaknafein8891 on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 08:17:59 AM AEST
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| The title is very attractive, I could not keep myself away, and I'm glad. |
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Re: Kissing the Wolf
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by Willofree on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 12:36:29 PM AEST
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Wow Naz, So creative and profound. In reading the poem it felt like the inner dialogue was like a conversation between the ego and super-ego. A thought ..... what seemed to be became what was.....?
Your creativity seems endless
Willofree
Terry
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Re: Kissing the Wolf
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by freckle on
Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 10:43:41 AM AEST
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Absolutely wonderful! I would love to own a book with this poem in it. Great job Nazzy...I will read this more than once and enjoy it each time!
Carol |
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Re: Kissing the Wolf
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by Rylo on
Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 04:01:48 PM AEST
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| This was a truly amazing piece of writing here, excellent job. |
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Re: Kissing the Wolf
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 05:13:05 PM AEST
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Damn I loved this!!!! Reminded me alot of myself hiding in sheeps clothing
Or should I say....wolves clothing??? teeheehee
Hoowwwwwwwwwwlllllllllling good write!! |
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