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Array ( [sid] => 84323 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I fell like doing it again. [time] => 2005-02-13 23:02:16 [hometext] => Please comment on my writting. [bodytext] => I fell like doing it again
Although I know it is a sin.
See let me fill you in.
I used to be bulimic
I was very sick
I felt like I weighed like a 5,000 pound brick
I was brain sick, I was heart sick
I felt like I had been poisoned with arsenic.

But then it stopped.

This pain went away
No longer did I fell astray
nor was I in dismay.

Untill now. all those good feelings just fade away.
Im so depressed
why should I even be addressed
I want to protest
I thought I had progressed
But No! Not even a bit.
I have been outwit
I did it. I made myself vomit.
I quit my spirit is eternaly split.
Im just unfit.
Im taking a rest ,
Im not able to pass this test.

Im sorry. I LOVE YOU MOM, I LOVE YOU DAD.
I will see yall in heaven. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 197 [topic] => 61 [informant] => BEBE [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

I fell like doing it again.

Contributed by BEBE on Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 11:02:16 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

I fell like doing it again
Although I know it is a sin.
See let me fill you in.
I used to be bulimic
I was very sick
I felt like I weighed like a 5,000 pound brick
I was brain sick, I was heart sick
I felt like I had been poisoned with arsenic.

But then it stopped.

This pain went away
No longer did I fell astray
nor was I in dismay.

Untill now. all those good feelings just fade away.
Im so depressed
why should I even be addressed
I want to protest
I thought I had progressed
But No! Not even a bit.
I have been outwit
I did it. I made myself vomit.
I quit my spirit is eternaly split.
Im just unfit.
Im taking a rest ,
Im not able to pass this test.

Im sorry. I LOVE YOU MOM, I LOVE YOU DAD.
I will see yall in heaven.

Copyright © BEBE ... [ 2005-02-13 23:02:16]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: I fell like doing it again. (User Rating: 1 )
by purecitrus on Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 11:12:35 PM AEST
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poetry is a great way to express your feelings and you did that in a very obvious way. i hope you find a way to pass the test...

kate

Re: I fell like doing it again. (User Rating: 1 )
by Stellar on Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 11:15:17 PM AEST
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This is a very personal poem and you wrote it well.
Don't let any kind of set back deter you from succeeding.

Take care~Stellar

Re: I fell like doing it again. (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenn2004 on Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 12:43:21 AM AEST
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I really hope things work out for you.

Re: I fell like doing it again. (User Rating: 1 )
by quiet_no_friends_girl on Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 10:00:41 PM AEST
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please don't kill yourself -
if your strong on your faith you should know that God's the only one to take life, I was going to kill myself I've been in depression since 5th grade and ecspecially this august in my 8th grade year, so please need to talk my name is: (i mean my username is:

quiet_no_friends_girl

Re: I fell like doing it again. (User Rating: 1 )
by kt88 on Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 06:04:00 PM AEST
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hey y, you really said a lot in there. you always have me by your side even if we have a few fights. i love you and don't leave. it takes a lot of guts to addmitte when you have an illness like that. i love you!!!!

kt ;) ;* xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo

Re: I fell like doing it again. (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 04:30:00 AM AEST
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Bebe
I see by the comments that you are well liked.Believe me we all have faults.Please seek help we want you here.You have much to offer.
Keep posting Please !

Sinned

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