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How could you leave so soon?
Left me behind, left me to grieve
Now your Juliet has an open wound
How could you lie to me?
Tell me Romeo, why?
Of all the things to keep secret
You chose to hide that you would die
How could you keep on acating,
As if nothing would go wrong?
Now I don't know what to do
You're really gone
Romeo, oh Romeo
It's you I hope to find
But how, my love, could you be so cruel
And leave your Juliet behind [comments] => 11 [counter] => 206 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Kie-Kie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Romeo, How Could You?

Contributed by Kie-Kie on Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 09:31:35 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Romeo, dear Romeo
How could you leave so soon?
Left me behind, left me to grieve
Now your Juliet has an open wound
How could you lie to me?
Tell me Romeo, why?
Of all the things to keep secret
You chose to hide that you would die
How could you keep on acating,
As if nothing would go wrong?
Now I don't know what to do
You're really gone
Romeo, oh Romeo
It's you I hope to find
But how, my love, could you be so cruel
And leave your Juliet behind

Copyright © Kie-Kie ... [ 2005-02-12 21:31:35]
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Re: Romeo, How Could You? (User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 09:35:48 PM AEST
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Great poem...Very heart felt
Sorry for your loss...

Clark

Re: Romeo, How Could You? (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 09:36:57 PM AEST
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wow, I really loved this write. Sorry for your loss. Maybe he loved you too much to tell you, I can understand how much that would hurt though.

Re: Romeo, How Could You? (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 09:37:47 PM AEST
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that was really moving and sad Im so sorry *hugs*
pix xx

Re: Romeo, How Could You? (User Rating: 1 )
by Stonedraider23 on Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 09:53:45 PM AEST
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Great write hope you will love again

Re: Romeo, How Could You? (User Rating: 1 )
by Wesley_Dale_Willis on Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 10:09:51 PM AEST
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Give the boy the benefit of the doubt. Maybe just maybe he was hoping for a miracle. Sorry for the loss may his spirit stay with you always...We all lose loved ones, read mine called Gene and Lucy Birdsong, I lost my friend almost 2 years ago. Gene Birdsong.

Re: Romeo, How Could You? (User Rating: 1 )
by Psyche on Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 10:11:10 PM AEST
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Thank you for sharing with us this expression of your grief. We hurt with you.

Re: Romeo, How Could You? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 10:18:02 PM AEST
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I'm deeply sorry for your loss. Beautiful poem....It's terribly sad

Re: Romeo, How Could You? (User Rating: 1 )
by Rxqueen on Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 10:57:59 PM AEST
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This is a very deeply moving piece. So tragic, like Romeo and Julliete. Great job. I am sorry for your loss sweetie.

Re: Romeo, How Could You? (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 09:33:11 AM AEST
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So sorry for your loss. A beautiful poem. He will live on always in your heart.

((((HUGS)))))

Love Sweetangelukxxx

Re: Romeo, How Could You? (User Rating: 1 )
by Scarlett on Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 05:38:33 AM AEST
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very moving and well expressed. i'm sorry for your loss.

Re: Romeo, How Could You? (User Rating: 1 )
by tx_graffiti_gal on Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 06:08:05 AM AEST
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I need a hankie all I can say.

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