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Array ( [sid] => 8411 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Question Yourself [time] => 2002-12-11 20:40:00 [hometext] => I hate these type of people and saw a whole lot of them one nite while sitting at Denny's one nite. i was inspired........... [bodytext] => pretty little girlz with fake stupid faces
the smile and the grin it quickly erases
all the pain in thier eyes that never was there
they wander through life without a care
dont you question the things that dont seem to be
ask yourself now, and set yourself free
in this process, however, you may find
somthing thats ugly so youll always be blind
blind to my chaos and madness and greif
blind to these things which i find no releif
im not scared though and ill stare them in the face
testing my destiny, fighting with fate
its fine for now, to live in this madness
fighting this life, questioning exsistence
maybe you should try, but just for a while
take away the fakeness
wipe off the smile
look at whats real and what seems to matter
brace yourself though and prepare for disaster [comments] => 2 [counter] => 153 [topic] => 21 [informant] => staryeyed [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
Question Yourself

Contributed by staryeyed on Wednesday, 11th December 2002 @ 08:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



pretty little girlz with fake stupid faces
the smile and the grin it quickly erases
all the pain in thier eyes that never was there
they wander through life without a care
dont you question the things that dont seem to be
ask yourself now, and set yourself free
in this process, however, you may find
somthing thats ugly so youll always be blind
blind to my chaos and madness and greif
blind to these things which i find no releif
im not scared though and ill stare them in the face
testing my destiny, fighting with fate
its fine for now, to live in this madness
fighting this life, questioning exsistence
maybe you should try, but just for a while
take away the fakeness
wipe off the smile
look at whats real and what seems to matter
brace yourself though and prepare for disaster




Copyright © staryeyed ... [ 2002-12-11 20:40:00]
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Re: Question Yourself (User Rating: 1 )
by yellow_sundragon on Wednesday, 11th December 2002 @ 11:26:12 PM AEST
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Wow. I never realized the harsh reality. This is really good. I'm glad I took the time to read this. Keep writing!

YS


Re: Question Yourself (User Rating: 1 )
by Sarah22 on Thursday, 12th December 2002 @ 12:36:43 AM AEST
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beautiful work .




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